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for The Descent of Magic

by Lomonaaeren

person sp777
schedule July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
About #22.... *flips the table and kicks chair over* Dammit! What was that ending! You did that purpose! To get an insane reaction...didn't you??? Admit it!....good chapter by the way. :-) SPEAKING of insane reactions....I almost expected Draco to come busting out that wall like Bruce Lee shouting 'oh HELLL!!! No!' That would have been funny. Speaking of funny, I noticed that folks tend to read your stories that have a political edge to them more so than any others. Have u noticed?
schedule July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow, applying those home truths really hurt huh. Both Mio and Hugo needed to hear them but damn, what a slap in the face. Closer to stabbing knives in Hugo's case, but he needed to hear it and Har REALLY needed to say it. We'll see what happens when the air clears and the dust settles.
It was politic of Draco not to let Har see him gloating. I'm glad he's living up to some of his slyth traits and rep. :P
person SP777
schedule July 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about#24...

...and the crowd....goes...WILD!!!!!! People have gathered
to throw a parade in Harry's name, they are throwing confetti,
there's trumpets, there's horns, there's just freakin' music PERIOD!

Because ladies & gentlemen, Harry Potter got his groove back and
told Hugo in the nicest possible way..' your attitude was fucked up
towards me and I'm not taking your shit anymore. Get over it!'

Yes, life is good. :-)
schedule July 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*clapping* yeah!!!! It's about time Harry finally told Hugo off. He was totally being a selfish brat and he deserved to hear his own words repeated back to him. That was very effective. Great chapter! Liked the one before it too. I keep missing chapters because things are a bit chaotic and reading on my phone just doesn't let me review (it keeps changing my name to wierd things when I try to sign in). I still feel bad for Draco... his son needs a swift kick in the rear because he's soooo self-centered.
person ChaosLady
schedule July 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was a very difficult conversation for all parties involved. Well written.
schedule July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
winces. teenage emotions are such unstable things... though in scorpies case he has a certain amount of justification. They say you make your most screw ups on your eldest child, if that happens to be your only child as well... at least draco can acknowledge that he made mistakes now. That's a big self growth step.

interesting... i don't know how successful that's going to be, but at least har is willing and has the energy to have a shot at it now.

um, *scratches head. i guess draco wasn't as ready as he thought he was.
person ChaosLady
schedule July 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Draco is afraid to fall in love? He's not the only person in the world like that. Harry's not, but he's not afraid of much of anything anyway. Excellent update!
person SParker
schedule July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #22...

1. Daaayyuuum Draco, don't kick him in the GOOD knee! :-D

and over protective much?

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schedule July 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ahhh... so good that Harry has admitted to himself that he has feelings for Draco... Draco you're up next! lol
schedule July 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
And how! Well, at least har has learned the fine art of knowing when to shut his mouth and do what he's told. :P
I say, is it just me or has draco gotten mighty protective of his patient?