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for The Descent of Magic

by Lomonaaeren

schedule August 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This definitely felt like a filler chapter.
person SParker
schedule August 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #27...

Finally! The Spark That Harry Started within Draco is starting to
blaze! Who knows maybe we'll see that Malfoy strut, you know the one
that proclaims he's 'cock of the walk'. The one that announces that
he can take on Astoria & Scorpius any day of the week.
person ChaosLady
schedule July 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Finally! The sexual tension was getting to me!
schedule July 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Har handled Highfeather rather well... arrrrrrgh. What a place to leave it. Now maybe draco will finally get out of the cupboard.

Oh damn, they are just adorable together. It doesn't have to be all fire and passion to make it work. Quiet give and take and that happy buzz/glow from being around each other and patience with each other can go a long way. I don't know how long they'll be able to hide that happy glow, that spark they get from being around each other though.

nothing like that hay seed look/feel to reel in the suckers. ^^
person SParker
schedule July 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #26...

I'm surprised Draco would feel insecure with being open
with Harry. Because of the fact, they both were such fierce
competitors...and they never minced words when they were younger.

They've known each other for so long, you would think Draco would remember
that.
person moodysavage
schedule July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think I'm going to strangle you... maybe harry should trip and fall into draco
schedule July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please oh please return to your computer and write the next chapter! This is the most evil of all cliffhangers in existance. I loved this chapter and I love jealous Draco, I cannot wait to see another update!
person lividfire
schedule July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wicked girl!!!!
OMG, what a splendid cliffhanger:D
person ChaosLady
schedule July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Dammit just kiss already!
schedule July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Way to leave us hanging. We've been waiting for this moment for quite a few chapters and now you leave us hanging. There is so much I want to know. I look forward to the next chapter.