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for The Descent of Magic

by Lomonaaeren

schedule April 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*staring blankly at the screen* there? you stopped the chapter there? Harry finally figures out the problem and you stopped... there?!?

I think that WE READERS need to UNITE... CHASE our awesome author down (that would be you)... and MAKE you add one more paragraph that gives us the ANSWER... like... right NOW!

please?

ur going to make me wait... aren't you?
schedule April 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
that was a most subtle weaving in of back story, nicely done.
drat and blast, now i'm left wondering what he;s discovered. i HATE dangly story bits. it will be interesting to see how the house elves tie in.
person Nathoca
schedule April 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This fic promisses. I'm waiting for the next chapter. Kisses.
person SP777
schedule April 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good start...I feel how Harry is feeling about the knee, only for
me it's both my ankles...and God help me when it's cold.

It, also, hit me you're doing a different take on the 'Trials & Tribulations
of being a Father'! :-] I like it! It's good to see that it's Scorpius being
the pain in the butt for a change.

By the way, in a nutshell, what WAS Darwin's theory of evolution? 'Cause I confess
I had NO patience for science in school.
person dominique1
schedule April 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i like that ginny gave harry his kids but i do love darry
schedule April 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
definitely an interesting beginning. I'm glad you have Al and Scorpius in the story and i'm looking forward to reading about their antics. Please keep it up!
schedule April 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
a gryff malfoy... oh that's just classic. are luc and cissa alive. if not they must be rolling in their graves. mwahahaha.
anyway, looking forward to seeing this progress.