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for The Descent of Magic

by Lomonaaeren

person Sera21
schedule August 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my dear, you are so very very talented. Its like you have creative juices instead of blood. How do you come up with these new storys and ideas time and time again? I have read many storys but you always come up with a new plot or new way of telling it. When I consider I havn't read a sex-less fanfiction in many many years I don't regret that this one was the one to change that.Given, yes, I do certainly want a few scenes with them screwing like rabbits in spring time but I shall have to be off to peruse some of your others storys and see if I can read some smutty fun that way ;)
schedule August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is the end of the story?! I realize that it can't go much futher, but not even one more chapter?
schedule August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
it's come out very well. It just goes to show that you don't HAVE to throw in limes, limons and lemons to create an effective and powerful drarry.
I look forward to to whatever project you come up with next. Will the next installment of the mark of the fox series be coming out soon?
schedule August 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So Phin was just being a pot stirring prat then. Fair enough.
Nice to know it's not just the pure bloods catching it the neck for cruelty. ^^
I wonder how Astoria feels knowing that in the grand scheme of things in her Ex's life, she's simply not that important. ^^
nice one with Mio and Highfeather there Draco.
I love the subtle dance between har and draco. No surprise Mio picked it up. She is VERY observant.
Is it a challenge to build the relationship without lemons being involved? I'm liking the outcome so far at any rate.
person SParker
schedule August 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #29...

The both of them really are a bunch of saps, aren't they?
Can't wait for them to actually act on it.
schedule August 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I can't wait until the meeting actually starts.
schedule August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just want to keep smiling after this chapter but thought it might be confusing if I just made a ton of smileys in my review. :)
schedule August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Neh, didn't har have black blood in him through Doria black? grandmother or great grandmother... can't remember which? so what is phinius rabbiting on about. I mean sure, Draco is a more direct descendent but har is still of the blood line.
Heh, i doubt they'll be able to hide it from Mio for to long. She's just that smart.

Yay for reconciliation! banzai! banzai! that's har and hugo sorted at least.

Oooooh, and well on the way for reconciliation number two, Draco and Scorpi. Excellent. ^^

so for the slow reviewing... i have NOT been healthy lately. Vertigo and dizzy spells are sooooo NOT fun.
person SParker
schedule August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #28..

''...and the cycle of healing FINALLY begins.''
Though those boys will always be headstrong.

Will this story be solved on the issue of house
elves & families here or in another story?
schedule August 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Draco and Scorpius cleared the air a little.