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April 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
that sounded intense.
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April 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
To be frank, I am speechless!
I have not expected to stumble upon such a well-written fic here - I mean it. Your writing is extremaly good and the plot is original as well as intriguing.
I love the character of Professor Moroe - on the other hand, though, he seems just too perfect to be real, and I expect him to show his true face sometime in the story - not that I thing he's a bad character (though I don't know what you plan do do with him later in the story), but right now the man seems to be more than just human he is so wonderful and smart and handsome etc. A little unrealistic, but loveable character.
What I like the most about the story, is that you use REASON to explain things, you actually write the explanations REASONABLY and that is what got my heart. There is logic behind your writing and your plot, and not just emotions and unbelievableness.
Take care and keep up writing, for you are realy good at it.
-SinfulMind
I have not expected to stumble upon such a well-written fic here - I mean it. Your writing is extremaly good and the plot is original as well as intriguing.
I love the character of Professor Moroe - on the other hand, though, he seems just too perfect to be real, and I expect him to show his true face sometime in the story - not that I thing he's a bad character (though I don't know what you plan do do with him later in the story), but right now the man seems to be more than just human he is so wonderful and smart and handsome etc. A little unrealistic, but loveable character.
What I like the most about the story, is that you use REASON to explain things, you actually write the explanations REASONABLY and that is what got my heart. There is logic behind your writing and your plot, and not just emotions and unbelievableness.
Take care and keep up writing, for you are realy good at it.
-SinfulMind
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April 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Why do I get the feeling this guy is voldermort in disguise.
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April 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am getting more scared for Harry but glad to see him excited about learning
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April 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hotflower901, I have exactly the same feeling :D Exciting, isn't it? But let's not jump to conclusions too quickly :D As much as I would like it to be Voldemort, the author may have something completely different in mind for the character of Professor Moroe, and I'd rather not get disapointed later on, when it turns out it's not Voldie after all.
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The story is the highlight of my day, isn't that sad? I desperately need to get a life...
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The story is the highlight of my day, isn't that sad? I desperately need to get a life...
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April 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Damn. That is really hot. I love this story. I've barely been able to tear myself away from it. It really well written and I can't wait to read more.
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April 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is just TOO COOL. I love it! The concepts are so interesting and so unlike anything I've ever read before. I'm digging it big time. Please never stop writing - and please never abandon this story. It's so awesome. I think I will probably save it to my computer to reread in the future. =)
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April 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. My. My. my. Lol. This was epic. I loved the explosion. =) Eager for more though I am starting to wonder if it isn't Voldemort himself that is this Professor.
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April 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is an incredible story! I stayed up all night reading it's that good. :D You've clearly put a lot of thought into your writing. Intriguing, creative, and compelling reading. I have some suspicions about Maximillian, if I'm right I'm not sure how it would work but definitely have suspicions though not necessarily in a bad way. Can't wait for more, please update soon. Take care,
Mouse
Mouse
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April 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love your story! Professor Maroe is a well developed character and I love how his and Harry's relationship is progressing. I started reading and just couldn't stop. I can't wait to read more and see where you go with the story!