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for Wooing the Reluctant

by makochan0217

schedule June 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am so EXCITED over this story!! Oh my gosh it just kept me reading and reading and got to the last chapter up before I have to leave for work! YAY Its got suspense and so much depth and details all tied together!! I love how you have developed the story and each of the characters!! LOVE IT!!
schedule June 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I do really like where you're going with this. I think it's grand that Harry is incorporating psychological techniques, which many can find helpful especially with the trauma many Wizards suffered throughout the war. Then again perhaps that's a bit overdone in fanfiction, but at the same time it seems to be overlooked in the original work. I really do look forward to the next chapter.
schedule June 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!!!! Sounds like a good first date!!!
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and can't wait to read more! *please write more soon* Thanks so much for sharing it!
schedule May 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
okay draco *rubs his shoulders like a boxer in the ring, preparing to go out to the fight again. "you;ve made yourself a prime opportunity here. Don't screw this up. get in there and go for it. Scheming will only take you so far... You've got to fight... for your right... to Haaaaaarrrryyyy!" *nods wisely. "you may even have an unexpected ally in young Teddy. use him well."

schedule May 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Don't ruin this chance Draco!!! Best foot forward!!!
schedule May 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
lol I loved the doll! that is so totally stating his intentions... in the most arrogant and annoying way possible... it totally fits!
schedule May 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*shakes head. interesting... that's one way to put it. well, at least he has Har's attention, even if it's due to murderous rage. would silencing the thing work... or the general area the thing is in? Meh, har should have gone muggle about it. summoned the thing to him then nail and /or stuck it to a wall in some unused room and then silenced the door. >>
The articles made me snicker. the pick up lines from the doll even more so. this is going to be a most... lively courtship. ^^;
person jami_lee
schedule May 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
just found your story and i love it!! wondering what draco has plan for harry.
schedule May 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good luck Harry but I think Draco has you beat.