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for Wooing the Reluctant

by makochan0217

schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aw it didnt post the first time I dont think. *wracks brain to remember what I said while all excited*

Uhm, think something like aaah I knew it would be a ring, Harry is a lucky boy to have one with gems the size of peas on it. And I hope that his gift back to Draco is something cool.

I like that they had the "Dont hurt him or else!" talk on both the guys, and am waiting in anticipation for the advice Pansy gave Harry for Dracos present. I am hoping its something sophisticated that he will love (Though I know he would like Harry on a platter too lol)

The quill is epically brilliant. I wish I had one, though it would make daydreaming in class rather different, and probably too embarrasing hehehe.

Thanks for writing
person Miri Daray
schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating! Great way to continue I cannot wait until the next chapter!
person addiena saffir
schedule September 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am almost dying of curiosity about what the gift from Harry will be. Oh the conundrum of picking out which fantasy to root for. hmmmm Harry wrapped in nothing but a dark chocolate bow? or the more likely act to do with lucius which will help lead to Harry being wrapped in nothing but a dark chocolate bow... heheheh
schedule September 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really? No one else was even curiose? *gives you a stunned look. how could they not be. I mean, to date draco's presents have been thoughtful and entertaining.

now, now, Draco. No baiting the in laws. you need them on side to help you land your man. heh, typical George... always an eye out for opportunity. ^^ Still, har's adopted family were a lot friendly to draco than his were to har. I'm glad Draco's friends could give har a tip though as har has a point. Outside of the gifts meanings, har doesn't really know a lot about draco.

lol, draco does indeed have a firm ally in Teddy. ^^

Well, no one can say they don't have chemistry. har's body certainly likes him a lot. maybe the rest of har should follow suit. ^^

I wonder if this surprisingly un disastrous mutual family meal will lead to the end of the malfoy/ weasley feud. They seemed to find plenty of common ground to chat about... the ladies anyway.

Go Arthur. At least his 'parents' are fully behind him and Ron is coming round. Ginny, seriously, just give it up already. you had your chance and all has obviously not gone well. it can't be healthy to obsess that much.

gushes happily over the ring. ... eheh, sorry, wedding carry over there. (my bro got hitched at the weekend and i forgot to check out their rings. >.< )

I applaud Draco for his restraint. This may have started off as a plot to clear his name but it's quickly become very much more. His restraint helps show har that he's serious.

I do look forward to seeing what Draco's friends have suggested and what har manages to swing.

person thrnbrooke
schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
And what is Harry going to give Draco?
person delia cerrano
schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Now this is a really really delightful story. Love how you're writing Harry & Draco. Would love to see a little jealousy
from Harry but Draco needs to fix it right away because I want them to be together. Hoping for a hot love scene soon also...greedy? yes but I still want it.
person Talltree-san
schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
...I want that quill XD! Also Ginny should be ashamed of herself, what would Oliver think if he saw her acting this way as if she still with Harry.
schedule August 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Haha, yes, read it all in a very short time, and no, your chapters are perfect in length. I too love Lomonaaeren an am currently crunching through those of hers I find interesting.

Read chapter 7 today, a little late it seems but glad youre updating and hope the computer is fixed. Oh and I changed my name from Fairy to Sei lol.

This chapter was awesome, good set up and insight. I can kinda guess the things that each set of friends wants to say to Harry and Draco but it will be funfun to read :)
person thrnbrooke
schedule August 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hope to be a "fly" on the wall and find out what these two groups have to say.
schedule August 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh no... let's talk... Harry and Draco are in for the 'don't hurt my friend or I will hurt you' talk lol.