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October 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I rather liked the idea of the phoenix birth. Actually, I've already wondered about it.
Thank you for the fiction.
Thank you for the fiction.
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March 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Really nice idea... sort of two endings to the same story. So when his human self dies he becomes a phoenix forever? And his human mate gets left behind? Not allowed to join the phoenix? Just left lonely? Bummer!! I'll have to check your other stories for one with a happier ending.
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November 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sad!!!
This was heart-wrenchingly sad with just the first chapter; and as much as I love a happy ending, it shows a little that the second one was not part of the original story. Though it pains me to say it, I think this fic is more impressive with just one chapter. (Still, the second one was great to read. :P)
- Dime
This was heart-wrenchingly sad with just the first chapter; and as much as I love a happy ending, it shows a little that the second one was not part of the original story. Though it pains me to say it, I think this fic is more impressive with just one chapter. (Still, the second one was great to read. :P)
- Dime
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March 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I need tissues! Okay, that was a fabulous story, even if it did make me cry. I'm glad Harry got a second chance; you have a very interesting story here. Good job!
Leania
Leania
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March 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
man am i glad you added that second chappie. the first by itself was just so damn depressing. And no one picked up on the fact that har was being raped at home? Slack, old man, very, very slack. I sincerely hope something rotten happens to vernon, before he picks up some other poor kid as a f^ck toy.
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March 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the story idea and you did a great job of portraying Harry's emotions. But the side plot of Harry being sexually abused by his uncle actually distracted from the main story and kind of ruined it. The line where his uncle says "I'm frustrated" was out of place and actually a shock when I read it. The focus of the story was about Harry looking for his mate and then how he went through the emotions of giving up because of the way Snape hated him. I loved how that first chapter ended because it hit pretty hard. And I liked how Snape used a truth serum to find out the truth.
But there was no attention given to Harry working through his history of abuse, either by himself or with Snape... or any resolution of his uncle being punished or even confronted. The problem just seemed to be thrown in there to add more to the plot but it actually had the opposite effect. Your story is really good without it.
But there was no attention given to Harry working through his history of abuse, either by himself or with Snape... or any resolution of his uncle being punished or even confronted. The problem just seemed to be thrown in there to add more to the plot but it actually had the opposite effect. Your story is really good without it.