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i think it would be good if harry claimed the spot as head of the house of black threw sirius. the way i see it a black at one time must have got the idea to rent their land in london to muggles to make money hence the reason a family like the blacks have a home in the middle of the muggles. so as a result the black holding company is payed rent from every home or business within a mile in all directions of number 12 grimwald place. as a result of getting 500 pounds a month rent for every 1/8 of an acre they are rolling in money. an yes in some countries it is normal to own the house but not the land and as a result pay rent to the land owner. as a ruff guess it would be about 250,000 homes because those homes are literaly wall to wall next to each other, an at 500 pounds a house that is 125 million pounds a month land rent.an even if you say my number seems a bit high o.k. say less houses in our 1 mile circle so we only get 50 million pounds a month that is still 600 million pounds a year. an for easy math we say the exchange rate of pounds to galleons is 6 pounds to the galleon so the blacks make a 100 million galleons a year in rent before taxes to the muggle goverment. an sirius has been locked up for 10 years now so that is 1 billion galleons before taxes just sitting waiting to be claimed.

now a good question would be can harry get dowery's from these families that he is taking the girls into his harem? now i know the weasely family have no money but the others likely would. an the reason i seem so concerned about money, money, money is because money is what drives the world. you could be the nicest guy ever with the best ideas ever and without money it is meaningless, also you could be the nastyest guy ever with rotten ideas but with enough money people will figure out a way for your ideas to turn out great.

harry will need lots of money to pay spys to find things to use a blackmail against members of the goverment. you do not get powerful jobs and keep them because you are a nice guy if you did arthur weasley would be king of the world. you get powerful jobs and keep them threw bribery, blackmail and threats against peoples businesses and family, you think dumbledore has kept all his jobs all these years by being nice, i think not.you have to threaten to bankrupt peoples families and have the means to do so because the first time you make that threat it will be taken lightly the second time it will be taken much less lightly an if a third threat against a family is needed to be made it will be taken as a fact since two other families were already wiped out by you.

It is good so far and I'm glad you took my comment. I don't mind Harry's Harem, it's just overdone. But I do read them like I'm reading this one now.

now i think we need a little back story as to why harry can do spells that are way above first year, such as he uses his invisablity cloak to sneek out and practice spells in an empty class room from 9p.m. to midnight every day. an if he learns 1 spell every half an hour that would be 6 spells a night and 30 spells a week pending he gave himself weekends off. so if he started this right after he got the cloak it would give him about 25 weeks. so that would be about 750 spell he would learn, which seems like a lot but when you figure the students likely learn about 1 spell a week per class the means for charms transfiguration and defence that would be 120 spells a year so harry may be up to 5th or 6th year since of course the spells get harder as you go along.

i sure hope harry's nine inch dick is the result of a spell he has done on himself rather then nature otherwise as an adult he is likely to be at least 18 inches if not longer. an who would want or need something that big unless you want to tie it in a knot?

now what would be interesting to find out is that the purebloods in azkaban are being kept alive to insure that their family lines continue. an as a result sirius as well as many deatheaters have several children each some created by fudge as well as dumbledore who are hoping to get their hands on all that gold stored away in those vaults. but to do that they need to wait till the children are 11 years old the problem with that is that harry is planning on claiming it all first and thereby bursting their bubbles.

harry's going pedo? what year is har in here, cause unless it's first year, gin isn;t ten. (unless your re writing things) would a pre teens body even be able to do that? anyway, I wonder who else he'll tag. Oh, it would be hilarious if he got dumbles ring... and tommy boys. Being the new heir of slyth would be useful indeed to a rising DL. He'd have to be careful with dumbles though, if he;s still totting the death stick. will the hallows or the horcruxs get much play here? also, if they need a harem to keep them stable, how come james had only lily... or did he have more laying about that we didn't know about... or did he not have a chance to start collecting yet. Or maybe dumbles hexed him, wouldn't put it past the old goat.

Ugh, I wish someone would do a Ron's Harem already. There are way too many Harry's Harem stories. It's boring now. A Ron's Harem story would be new and fresh.

i think harry should claim tom riddles house do to fighting him twice now and winning both times. an do so by claiming " i lord harry james potter hereby claim by right of conquest all that belonged to tom riddle jr. also known as lord voldimort and his vassels also known as deatheaters and as i say it so mote it be." as a result harry would get everything that belonged to the deatheaters, titles, property, vaults and businesses as well as the deatheaters and their families as his to do with as he pleased.

as far as harry's women go i would love to see fluer as one of his girls. how this would happen is harry is in diagon alley and sees her caught be slave traders and buys her knowing what kind of life she would have if he does not. an no harry has no clue as to who she is just that a girl as good looking as her will likely be bought to be in the sex trade an that in 20 or 30 years will be to used up to be worth anything and will likely be killed at that point. so as he sees it he is in fact saving her life. an how she ended up getting caught was the fact she was on vacation with her family who stopped by the alley and wondered of after getting bored an since she had no house crest or hogwarts crest she was an open target for the slave traders.