rate_review Reviews

yikes, it must have been cathartic for you to write this. I think it was a good portrayal of date rape between teens. I think this sort of situation is a little bit less...violent, I guess, and I think the victim is more prone to having to endure the guilt of feeling pleasure during the interaction. So, I thought that was well-done.

It was a bit short, but I think a good enough snapshot of the overall gist of Hermione's inner struggle. If you were to ever revise this, I'd say that some insight into Cormac's psychology would be helpful for painting a more intricate and realistic picture of the situation. I also think some of the phrasing was a little bit uncomfortable, but in general it was well-written.

(Also, I too have used fanfic as an outlet for experiencing something like this, so if you ever need someone to talk to... *points to messaging* I didn't tell anyone in RL either; only people I knew through fanfic, but I found that the healing was better this way. More people here and on FFnet are more understanding than the people in RL are likely to be, simply because there's a degree of separation so it doesn't ruin any kind of friendship, only strengthen it)

Er, ramblings aside, overall I thought it was a good depiction of a different side of rape. Thanks for writing!

You were right, it's pretty dark, makes you want to punch him! I am glad that writing this brought you some peace.
It is very well written and i hope it serves as a warning to all, beware skeeze balls with open drinks.

Wow....this is really dark but its really good. I can honestly say that evem though your fics are rather dark, Ive enjoyed them none the less. Please keep up all your good work :)

usually i don't enjoy one shot since it's only one shot. but this is quite good.

tell ron he would kill him, ps ron did not know that hermione like him, she did not say slughorn party was a date, and lavendor was the one that keep kissing ron.