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by Lomonaaeren

person kit
schedule March 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
excellent story!
I am really interested in how their relationship will develop. Poor harry haha. I do like to see him pout though. he is pretty bad at concealing his true self... or maybe draco is just too observant. I wonder if Harry's hypothesis is correct and that Draco really is an unspeakable.
schedule March 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Heh, that'd be a crap tone of owls taking their mail back where it came from.
wow, draco's really just not going to let this lie huh. he's going to push til he knows everything. Will that hurt him, fighting against the spell? Draco must have been truly desperate to fling himself into space like that. at any rate, the game will be up soon if har keeps giving himself away like that. His cover story wasn't that good to begin with and it seems lying and living up to said lie are very different things.
person UnwantedMemories
schedule March 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is brilliant, I honestly dont think I've read one like this before. And yoooou, are a horrible, horrible person for leaving us on the edges of our seats! ;) keen for the next instalment.
person SP777
schedule March 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #3..

1. Well now, it's a true battle of wits here...Draco being witty & Harry
is about at his wits end. :-)

Anyway, you just about gave away what Draco does for living...

2. Well, the story idea would be based on..well this image I have in my
head. Draco & Harry become separated by *whatever you think best* and Draco
finds himself in an unknown place and in dangerous situations, while Harry
has to find out how to get him back.

I was thinking a distortion in time & space was the cause, but that's at the top of
my head.

I was thinking a one shot in the Cloak & Dagger [C&D] universe, but it would have to be
a LOOONG one shot, to make room for the buildup, solution & climax...etc. or just a simple
mini-chaptered story.

Whaddya think? :-)
schedule March 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ahh... Harry knows he's attracted and Draco is getting intrigued and attracted too... fun fun fun!!!
schedule March 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
drats. go away for a day or two and i miss the start of another sure to be epic loma story. neh, how do they know what BWL looks like enough to compare har to him? Is there a discription somewhere cause i doubt the photo's would stick in their minds.
hmmm, what chewed on draco I wonder. as for draco not getting to know him... oh, famous last words har, famous last words.
Does har still get the mail of the BWL or does is just get diverted to a dump some place?
person SP777
schedule March 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #2...

Okay, now I'm really curious...what did Draco get himself into?
But, it would be cool if Draco WAS an Unspeakable & he got into
trouble because of some mission! :-)

Too bad I don't write because now I got a story idea that would
have you on the edge or expand on your 'Cloak & Dagger' series.

Now, I'm being presumptuous/bold. :-(
schedule March 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like how he keeps asking 'who are you' like he knows he should know. I think Harry clearly disliking him is a clue too. Really good!
person W
schedule March 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
NICE!! I really like your idea for this story. Harry trying to lead a normal life is quite a common theme but you take it to entirely new heights. Very innovative! I'm really looking forward to Dracos story and also this strange little thing with the wards... Well, I'm sure it's going to be explained soon^^
person Leania07
schedule March 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start, I'm curious to see where you go with this. Glad Harry found a way of finding peace.

Leania