rate_review Reviews

This was absolutely wonderful. You have their personalities down very well, and grammatically speaking it's perfect. A very well-done piece of art.

I love how Draco is so focused on Harry... and how he used the word 'woo'... love that word... brings to mind all sorts of happy thoughts of Draco chasing Harry, being intense, and lots of plans on how to make Harry his. Now I'm wondering how he's going to track Harry down again. I can't see him waiting to be contacted about the mirror. Maybe through Ron or one of the people who helped him? Maybe he has a way to track Harry's wand? Ok that's all the guesses I have so far but I'm sure I'll still be thinking about it while I wait!

about #8...

Awww, Harry misses his dragon already. :-(
No more headaches, no more frustrations, no more 'sneak attacks'
from the velvet-footed bastard, during floo calls.

*sigh* :-/

But, anyway, in this story will Harry wind up needing to end the spell
in a desparate move to save people or something? Feel free to say no comment...

Oh, one day when you're not busy with all these stories, could you do a one-shot
on 'the 5 steps of courting a gryffindor'? You know, the unexpected stuff...flowers,
candy. gifts, dinner & sunsets. I know you got some romance in you. :-)

Yep Harry betrayed by Draco, could kind of see it coming.

im shocked! im in dismay! im bewildered! and I am so very excited to read the next chapter and see what happens!!

Cliffhanger! Or hanger on.. That is brilliant.. this story is fabulous, keeps be stuck to it. You know, I have been re-reading some of the stuff you have written (200 plus stories jeepers!) and I keep getting sucked into things again. Some things I think I may have read three times now.. you really have a way with spinning words, and so many great ideas.. please tell me that you write for publication IRL? I think I would buy those books.. the plots are so solid, and even when its all about the physical, it's written so well! Quite a coupe.

Oh, that was unexpected. Really was, even though Draco is such a Slytherin; too stubborn to let such a mystery go. Can't wait to see what happens next, will Harry tell him the truth, half-truth, or lie again? Would Draco really drop him like that if he lied or refused to tell him? CLIFFHANGER!!

Leania

AAAAhahaha...you go Draco! That plan to force Harry to tell his secret... so well planned and sneaky... I totally love it. Though ya' know Draco... Harry is so not going to tell you. Love it love it love it. And I loved Harry's slip up about Snape on the first day of class. He so gave away that he went to Hogwarts and that he knew Draco there. I bet it's driving Draco crazy!!!

about #6...

No offense, Ms. Thang, but I think you started off wanting to do an
actual 'flirt-battle', but got caught up in dicussing theories & Malfoy's
little plight.

Okay,don't kill me for saying this...

What I would have done is get the technical stuff out the way, gotten Draco situated in
a safe place and then, when everything had calmed a bit, have a little flirtation between
the both of them, before complications arose again.

...and yes, I liked the Malfoyesque comment that was made about the..umm..'penis'..but that's
just Draco being Draco. Therefore, 'Flirt-battle 2.0' should be in the near future.

So, with that being said, I will run & hide...

still pushing the edges there har... still, he is soooooooo going to miss draco if he manages to get him out safely. then he'll have to check on draco somehow from time to time. Also, is the mirror going to play more of a role. something that shows different times and places could be most inconvenient if it shows draco something that twigs him to har's identity. also, what's dark about it. dark magic usually has a price or a catch to it.
does har publish any of the theoretical stuff he comes up with?