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Haha yeah- tension is most defiantly relieved :P

Does Harry realize that this is what he wants, and not so much his isolation? I understand the not wanting to be bothered by the press and all that, but what he's got with Draco, he better not give that up! Even if/when the spell on Draco breaks or if he figures it out (or whatever) and Draco tries to leave, he better fight for it. :P I'm eager for the next chapter, to see what you have planned; I'm sure there's more torment and roller coaster rides in store. I await the next!

Leania

GAH! You write such great smut scenes.. they wind up not smutty, just, inspired, so raw. LOVE IT! I like the way they seem so silly, so human, and it's still mindblowing and gives the reader (me, and I am sure lots of others) that tummy tingle and makes them close their eyes and remember the last time they themselves felt that blissfully.. well, you get the idea. It's messy and silly and glorious and fun, and excruciatingly brilliant, and I think you are wonderful and translating that without it being insert peg a into slot B and humpity blah (sorry for the crude bit, but sometimes I think thats how people see it.. I write quite a bit of freelance porn for pay so I have to be creative in my line, and I have seen some really bland stuff.. if you ever consider it, you could make a fortune, if you don't already *grin*)

*clapping & cheering* I was so excited when I saw this chapter up and realized it was a LEMONNNNNN!!! I think you have written them a very sexy story and I am loving every bit of it :)

about #10..

O__O

Whuuu?!? Did she just come with it in this chapter??? Did she just deliver
the goods??? That was wonderful! Stupendous! Glorious! That was...WOW! :-D

Why don't you do this the majority of the time??? I miss reading your 'hot'
scenes! Well, don't stop there are other bedrooms that need christening by
Harry & Draco. Keep it going! :-)

After all, that's what AFF is all about, gurl.

*goes off to dance to Snoop's ''Drop it Like it's Hot''*

"should i stay or should i go now?" hm....
haha wonder what harry's choice will be. The suspense for when draco discovers the truth is killing me. excellent chapter, once again!

*cues dramatic music and breaks into a chorus of 'should I stay or should I go.'

bum bum baaaaaaaaaaaaah. what will his answer be.

Naw, isn't Draco such a little angel?! Not. (but that's why we love him so :)

This story is fantastic. I'll admit that I'm pretty frustrated regarding the slow progresson of their relationship with each other, but that's what I like in a story. Much more realistic than some of the slash fics out there, and the build up of tension is quite something (I'm about to explode. Seriously). Love it! Can't wait for more!

-Amber

about #10..

My oh my! I found myself wanting to see that duel from Harry.
But, I loved the dinner scenario...Draco was a gem as always. *rolls eyes* :-)

If any line deserved stealing it was this one,

I would not trust the wine. I am shocked Draco didn't put vertiserum in it and ask Harry to spill it.