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for Dynasty Obligations

by Daydreamer

schedule July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
so... I'm really sad this isn't finished! Please don't give up on it! It's fantastic!
person cat
schedule October 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
you should continue this, i'd love to know what happened next
schedule June 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Have one to compromise your life with people who have no values? Hermione
schedule April 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far. Please keep going. I just finished reading your other story Lost in the Music and really liked it too. The plot twist is really good, Severus being Hermione's dad makes a lot of sense and it's great to see a softer side to Draco. :o)
person katiekrm
schedule March 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think the decorating gesture would mean more to Hermione if Draco had done it himself. As it is, she has the house elves to thank for all the work. I wonder if she'll be mad that he used them. I can't remember if you've brought this up yet, but was Hermione still tortured by Bellatrix at Malfoy Manor? And why did the Malfoys act as spies? Because they supported the light or b/c following Voldemort no longer benefited them? I'm so glad you have Hermione reacting realistically to all of this. Snape was a dick to her in Dumbledore's office. Give him hell, Hermione! ;-) Or ignore him.
schedule March 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Omg! That was so thoughtful of Draco...I wonder if Mopsy will now be freed...hmmm. Cat wait for your next update!
person Citten
schedule March 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
poor draco he has a long way to go and he is going to have to be very patient. hermione, hermione what are we going to do with you. my dear you need to do some research and just breathe! well i will be watching and waiting for the next chapter and very excited to see what you will be posting and hopefully very soon! :)
person katiekrm
schedule March 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So I went from going "YYYYEEEEEESSSSSSS!" and clapping to going "NNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOO!" lol I was so happy that I was finally reading a "Hermione isn't a Granger" story where she keeps her name. Oh well. This is still the first one where she actually wants to keep her name. I am glad that you are portraying her as so upset. Her mother and Snape did risk her happiness and as Hermoine said, their safety plan didn't work out so well. I would never want Hermione to walk away from Richard. I think he's her one ally at the moment. Can't she just say that she's not going to go through with the marriage and make her mother and Snape sweat it out for a couple of weeks? lol Is she not as evil as me? ;-)
schedule March 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yes! So glad Hermione's giving them the what for! Go girl go. Loving this story and am excited to see the progression and Hermione's firecracker ways!
schedule March 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow...this is getting more and more interesting! I have this total vision in my head of what she looks like...and she is probably a knock out! I wonder how Snape will continue to treat her in class and in the future, i know that it is only for a little while but still...hmmm. And just to think about Harry and Ron's reaction...HA that will be fun! I kind of feel bad for Snape...kind of wish Laura would go back to him...although I get why they don't. Just sad for him...the family he couldn't have. I look forward to the coming chapters!