rate_review Reviews

Please finish this!!

I'm so sorry to hear about your friend. It is always hard to get your thoughts off of something like that... kind of fills the mind. Take all the time you need.

and reasonably so. take as much time as you need. we... well me anyway, will be eagerly awaiting your return. Damn you RL and your terrible emotionally disruptive curve balls. *shakes fist at it.

I love this story so much, its so interesting!

if you're stuck, maybe you could do something with Harry stumbling/walking onto Draco in a compromising position with like pansy parkison, or someone else.

Harry could be like crying or something but doesn't know why he crying over draco with someone else and Draco see's him crying before harry run/walks away.

just a suggesting? :)
Jeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep it up though, i honestly love this story

well, you've done a splendid job so far with the story.
I like this tension and that Harry isn't giving in to Draco soon/already.
Maybe they need to dance around each other a bit and then shack up together.
Or maybe you'd like the story to end in not-happy end which is great since let's face it HD pairing in this fic does not sound besotted that much to go on forever.
Honestly, love is sometimes to sacrifice and let oyur partner move on with someone else...but most fiction&tv leave that out.
I dunno why, not all ppl are selfish and monsters when they love.
and this story isn't even about love but about magical counterparts.

so does this make ron gay, gay for har only or bi curious?
how much of a manipulative twat is dumbles in this, cause it seems he's willing to let quite a bit slide to buff up their weapon... or at least that's the impression he's giving to date.

About the writers block, for one thing, i think it would be highly unlikely the a slyth prince like malfoy would permit his plans to be scuttled like that. at the mo, har is completely resistant when he's conscious.

so, it depends what you want to do. Do you want malfoy to conquer him and drag him kicking and screaming into this bond (angst and resentment to abound) or woo him into it, so while har is still subby, he's more accepting.

Because either way, there's the whole being a mini death eater to deal with. If har gives it up, how is he going to stay out V's hands.
I think, bond or not, he'd have to trust someone to enter a d/s type of relationship, unless he was captured and had the will beaten and trained out of him. Trust in those type of relationships is a must and I'm not sure if mini malfoy there is mature enough to swing it with out trying to lord it over har, which would only lead back to resentment and fighting the bond, which har is.

Also, why is Dumbles willing to let it slide so. while it might give har a much needed boost, it also places him in a very dangerous situation, considering the malfoy connections and while draco's no killer, i don't think he would be above giving har up if it meant his own life or his families... unless it has dangerous feedback. once again, the lack of trust issue.

apart from the power boost and sharing of abilities, malfoy seems to be getting more out of this deal if har is having subconscious desires to please. Apart for potentially kicked around, what does har get. in bond fics, critter fics and even d/s fics, the dom is supposed to protect and care for the sub, even as they discipline them and help them to learn and push their limits. d/s have controls like contracts and safe words, critters are usually reined in by their instincts, though bonds can vary a lot.

how subby do u want har, cause don't forget, he's still got a job to do and now there's the extra complication of ron which is going to make malfoy go all dom ish.

if you're really stuck, flick through some d/s and bond fics. they might have some ideas you can tweak, or give you more of a direction to go in.

I think Draco did hear and I don't think he is happy with what he heard. I think he may find a way to get Harry into his bed and claimed before Ron tries to take what is his. HOpe more possessiveness is to come soon.

I hope that Malfoy will be jealous next... cause after the 'sleep on the floor' bit and him being so overbearing... I'm not liking him so much. Is he being extra mean because he's not happy that Harry turned out to be his counterpart? I hope that's it because otherwise he's just naturally a jerk and I'd feel bad for Harry being stuck with him.

har doesn't seem to be getting much out of this, apart from the whole 'u get to live' thing. Slyth tower? i thought the slyths were based in the dungeon or is it a head boy thing?

whoo hoo! seeeexy :)