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by M.V.Avery

person Anonymous
schedule June 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!!!
person Hurricane_Bridgette
schedule March 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh I am loving a this AU. Still an arrogant dou he but yet oozes that sex appeal. I hope he is at the club too andgets to feel jealously for the first time seeing her with Sirus. Are you still updating? Here or FF.Net? I hope didn't just read these three great chapters of an abandoned story. Thanks for sharing it.
schedule March 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking it so far. The scene between Tom and Hermione was pretty hot. I like their dynamic and it will be interesting to read how their relationship develops.

I think you managed to nail Tom's personality in a world where he's a normal human being. Although your Hermoine doesn't hold up to the one in the book. She's to vulgar and is missing the subtleness that's usually apparent in her personality.

schedule March 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Dr. Riddle isn't used to someone like Hermione. I wonder how long it will take for him to get her to see things his way, lol.

I like the little world you created...it's interesting.
schedule March 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You're off to a good start. I've never read a non-magical version of hp, so this is quite refreshing. I look forward to learning more about this new world.

Thanks for sharing.
person AlasseaM
schedule March 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great! You posted it in here :D