rate_review Reviews

If you're not already a published author, you should be. J.K.'s style is simple and endearing and you've captured it beautifully here, whether by accident or not. Your characterizations are spot on and your flow is teasing, yet written extremely well. Your language isn't verbose and it really helps here, especially with matching the feel and tenor of Rowling's.

Five stars all day, you deserve them.

I love kinky luna

I'm loving the story...
Please, Update soon!

It's always great to see another H/L story, it's one of my fav. pairings in the fandom, and you've got a nice one going on here. I look forward to the next chapter.

Nice Story. Seem s like when she leaves she'll probably go to Ginny nex. Awaiting more.

It's really good! HarryxLuna pairing is very nice and i like your approach. I hope you can update soon! maybe Harry getting more confidence and taking over ;)

Excellent story so far. You seem to building to a moresome relationship as believably as possible. I hope to see more in the near future.

I love Harry/Luna. It was my first ship and the only non-canon one I think could/should have really happened in the books. So I approve.

I like the characterisation of Harry and Luna in this and Ginny as well. Their concerns and actions are entertaining. The others... Not so much. Ron does not have to be that much of an asshole. Hermione was never that annoying.

The emphasis on contraception was interesting. Often not that much attention is paid to it in porno fics. I know I certainly don't.