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by choena

person she-who-waits-in-darkness
schedule January 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Liked loved and can't wait for more that was delicious with out being over sweet!
person delia cerrano
schedule January 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OK Maybe I'm slow but is Severus a vampire or animalus or whatever now? I just reread the whole thing to refresh what it was about reading the 10th chapt. Enjoyed it all over again. My favorite pairings are Harry/Sev & Harry/Draco. Don't care much about "reliving Remus/Serius at Hogwarts" but really enjoy how much they love each other & always have. Snape is so masterful, smart & when he shows his love & caring for Harry I melt like it was real.
schedule December 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another Chapter! Thank you very much <3 That saved my day! I hope Harry doesn't try to attack his new made (were)wolf friend! I look fprward to read the next chapter, but bevore that good look with your finale exams!! I'am sure you will do well :D
schedule December 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
well, that was rather less dire fall out wise than i figured it would be. we tend to forget that har is still pretty much a baby vamp. his control is still going to be a little wobbly, especially when faced in an intimate feeding spot. (last ones on the inner thigh yeah.)
i'm interested to know who white is and oopsie i guess har instincts took over again there. still, at least sev sort of forgave him.
person delia cerrano
schedule December 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So who is silver? Did I miss something or is he just coming into the story? Maybe I need to read the last few chapts again. So is Severus coming to see Harry as something more than a nuisance?
schedule November 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oopsie, looks like har's instincts got away from him a bit there. it's going to take time for har to face up to that and for sev over look that... which is going to make feeding interesting for a while.
i'm glad dumbles and edge have reached an accommodation. that will make things a bit easier on har.
person JesterCat
schedule November 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my - so yummy! Really I am lucky I browsed trough the Harry/Snape section today! <3 Well you git a new fan. I downright drank this story down. I could't stop reading and I still would be reading if there would be more chapters! Sorry didnt't even have the time to comment on every chapter because I was so focused on the story. I really look forward to read more! Thank you very much for sharing this!
person Polfso
schedule November 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
def really enjoying this story!!!! Vamps and magic hell yes!!!! Im sure other people complain about this but i like how the chapters are medium length not too short but not too long. And I love how harry has the vamp side that kinda takes over and does as it likes!!!
person delia cerrano
schedule November 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great 8 chapters! Fun idea. I thought Harry was falling for Edge then along comes Snape (one of my two favorite partners for him). Then I thought Oh Oh a threesome which I hate because I am too possessive & jealous to even want to read about it. But I read your authors' note & now I'm loving it & looking forward to more Snape/Harry & find out who Edge will end up with.






person unneeded
schedule September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hmmm, that revelation went pretty well. And considering ron and mio are pseudo family to har it think Edge may accept them as well and they him. All theses interesting little plot points. animalis and mooney allowing har to feed (though it's understandable why he'd want his mates neck to himself). Snape being a willing feeder too. I look forward to seeing where they lead.
oh good, maybe now Edge can find a ready source of blood and a safe place to hole up at night. I'm sure har would appricate having him around more too.