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by choena

schedule February 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
glad to see another chapter, and i have to wonder what exactly has changed in harry that he's not acting like the typical vamp in regards to edge, not to mention the thing between him and sev that's got edge all puzzled. keep up the good work :D
person Johnny
schedule February 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
omg i absolutely love this story i cant wait to read more!
<3 Johnny
schedule February 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i am really loving this story. Please update soon!!
schedule February 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm only on chapter four, but I absolutely love this story so far! Great job!
schedule February 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
looks like i missed a chappie or two. eheh, oops. anywho, ouch. way to smack him down sev.
wow, har's friends rock. so, basically, being bonded with har could help remi lose the wolf mad?
Well, not hard to guess who silver is. what is he? an animagus?
still sev's reaction was interesting? har's gone and bonded him or something hasn't he?
schedule January 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So yummy! A jealous Harry - I cant wait so find out what he will do when Severus spills it and how he will react to Harrys possesiveness
person delia cerrano
schedule January 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so good! And yeah!...Harry & Severus are talking, well sort of... Did we get told who Silver is? If not (because can't remember reading it) I vote for Draco. Severus would talk to him like that and Draco would love to be a trusted friend. Now that was a surprise action from Harry. Wonder what that was about & how Severus will handle it, much less how Harry will respond.
schedule January 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
write more soon its a favorite
schedule January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I dont think Ron was OOC He too can say something decent once in a while grin.
And I feel for Harry! Hope Sev regrets it a great deal. As always: Very nice!
schedule January 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
sigggggh. looks like gryff impetuousness and vamp abilities don't blend very well. har's gonna get his fool self killed rushing in like that... again.
i know har's instincts are all heywire and screaming to protect his sev but sev could have taken the beasty out easily enough if har had had the control to let him do it. those instincts are most troublesome.
well... that's one way to get them more comfortable with feeding... not recommended though i'd think.
oopsie, there go those instincts again... still, it's not like sev was fighting him. they're not going to be able to deny the mating urges much longer i think.
good thing papa edge was there to tidy up after.

yah, you can tell it's a bit forced but it's still okay. don't stress about getting your updates up. sometimes, if it won't flow, it won't flow. while, i do prefer you update regular like, sometimes you need to take a brake and then get back into it. you're the author here, you don't owe us zip. we're the lucky ones getting to read your offerings so just get them to us when you can neh?