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It's a really good story so far. Keep up the good work. Also please please update soon.

write more its really good

I Just About Cried When I Reached ThE End And There Was No 'Next Chapter' Option. :( Really Great Story. I Enjoy Reading It And Looking Forward To More!

So lovely! Edge and Remus would make a lovely pair altough I feel bad for Sirius... I look forward to the next chapter!

Glad to see you back on this story. Poor Sirius is right. It's like he gets gipped...Remus lives "forever", Harry has Remus as a guardian & Severus, Severus has Harry, Albus always gets his way & Edge (cool name by the way) could care less
and Sirius gets?? Remus for a little while like he's on loan or something and even during his time with remus he's planning & plotting what he'll do when Sirius is dead right in front of him! Basically he gets bupkis, nada, nothing, zip, zero. And he is so brave & understanding about it!

Enjoyed the story so far, but I had a thought on the whole guardian thing. If Harry is so protective of Snape, than it stands to reason that either he or Edge will turn him at some point so he won't leave Harry by way of death from old age. Would it not also stand to reason that a werewolf and his mate would also want to protect their cub from losing his love and the associated suffering that Remus is facing in the future? Though normally with the hardship a werewolf suffers and the nature of Remus I would not suggest it, why can't he turn Sirius who could then bond to Severus? Within the context of your story, it would be perfectly within reason.

Please don't answer by way of an AN. I would prefer for you to simply write the chapters as you will and learn your response as the story unfolds. This is by no way a request for a spoiler.

Really love your story, please keep up the great work!

Hi there!

Just read your fic and wanted to say that I enjoyed it very much! I love the whole fic and the character "Edge". One thing though, I'm guessing where you're going with the "Dante" thing, is he "Edge's" sire? If he is, then what you said about the Childe taking the same form of the Sire as an animal form - feline for Harry and Edge, is not taken into consideration when talking about "Dante", since he is a wolf and not feline. Just wanted to point that out in case "Dante" is "Edge's" sire....

Other than that, very cool fic and I'm looking forward to the next update!

This so great. I can't wait to learn more about this dante fellow!

Interesting chapter. I hope Dante doesn't prove to be a problem. They don't need that.