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for Vampire Bites

by choena

person KikiLoa
schedule June 5, 2021 at 12:00 AM

So I really loved your story. I usually give WIP's a wide berth but I just could not resist when I saw the plot and it hell if it wasn't worth it all even if I'm wringing my hands anticipating what comes next :P I actually finished this in 8 hours. It's longer than I usually take, but I was savouring every bit and dreading the end. I found that once I started I just could not stop reading. So kudos to you and thank you for such an enjoyable story. If you don't mind answering two quick questions, is it a strict top and bottom story or a switch? I'd love to know! And also, how often do you update your story? Can't wait for the next chapter. 
xoxo 

person Smile317
schedule June 1, 2021 at 12:00 AM

I'm glad Padfoot is okay. And happy to see Draco make an appearance. Still don't care for Albus. And the end of the chapter had my tears falling too. 😪. Great job with this story. 

person Smile317
schedule May 26, 2021 at 12:00 AM

I'm so happy you saved Padfoot.  Now we just have to move Harry and Severus along. Thanks for a great story. 
 

person Smile317
schedule May 18, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Sad tears.  ðŸ˜ª

person Jan
schedule May 13, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Loved that even though Harry's gonna live a really long life, you still gave him a normal teen reaction to his first time, I've read so many story where he just jumps right into bed with his partner all hormonal, not thinking twice about it, this is a nice change. Please update chapter 22 soon. 

person Jan
schedule May 11, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Hmm, I'm guessing it was Dante that enter Severus room...... but what does the box and note contain? 
Please update chapter 21 soon, I can't wait to find out what's gonna happen next. 

person Smile317
schedule May 11, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Ahhh. Happy tears. 🥲.  But what's in that box. And what's going to happen with Sirius and Remus. So many questions. Can't wait for the answers. 

person Smile317
schedule May 4, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Great story so far. Very intrigued. Thank you. 

person Smile317
schedule April 28, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Happy birthday to your daughter. This just keeps getting more interesting.  Lots of nuances to sort through. Thank you. 

person Smile317
schedule April 20, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Glad you came back to the story.  It's getting more interesting. 😀