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by choena

person oogies4u
schedule September 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh goodness... hope you still update this story.. please will you let me know when you update again .. puuuurty please. Love the line of the story. can not wait for more :)

DragZ
schedule August 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
most interesting. So a possible Edge and Sev huh? cool.
Is har's development going to speed up a bit now that he's getting real blood?
Why did Har dodge Siri's shoulder? Was Remi's influence very strong there or something?
I can understand why Remi's wolf would be restless, Godson or not, his mate is feeding a Vamp.
schedule August 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
great story! Can't wait for more!
schedule August 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The wolf is waiting for Harry to find his mate, isn't it? The wolf fears that the new vampire is interested in it's own mate, Sirius, however I'm guessing that Severus is Harry's mate. What would happen if Harry drank from Snape's neck? I look forward to your next update and cannot wait to see what happens next.
person Leania07
schedule July 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is getting interesting; I'm guessing a vampire form of a compulsion? Keep up the good work, hope to read more soon!

Leania
schedule July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
it happens to the best of us. When the plot bunnies bite it's best to go with the flow in case the rabid little buggers decide to chew bits out of us for ignoring them.

well, that's interesting. Edge now has Siri on side. I wonder what that 'magic touch' is going to do to dear Sevie. *insert evil cackle here.
person Anon
schedule July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is really good so far. I can't wait for Harry to start feeding from Snape. Please update soon!
schedule June 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I will admit, I was skeptical at first. Not anymore. Please, please! write more!!!! I like the description you gave of exactly what it was that Harry turned into. Very nice. Thanks :)
schedule June 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
sigh, the light side never really did get har did they. for all dumbles goes on about the power of love, he hasn't seemed to pick up just how lonely har is. If Edge is desperate for companionship, i imagine har is equally so. I hope har remembers that siri and remi love him still.
schedule June 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Definitely a chapter worth the wait. Please update soon! :D I truly love this story.

xoxo,
kiktat