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for Messy Eater

by Skettimon

person TgCId24
schedule March 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. Definitely want to buy more.
schedule March 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Mad props for doing a Ginny/Luna split. That's one of my favorites, and I'm thinking about doing that pairing next myself. The main thing I didnt like about this piece was the somewhat crass language. It's a personal preference that I'm aware not everyone shares, but I like to use softer words than "ass" or "pussy." Those words just don't seem... seductive to me.