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by Juwel

person Augustynka
schedule December 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM

The last sentence was best. Totaly!!!!

person Christy891112
schedule June 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I do love this story and honestly I would like to see the fleur watch make them but on a performance for her
schedule August 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
great job, very hot and still playful too. never enough good bill/harry. :D
person sciphy
schedule June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
now I am just going through and reading all of you m/m stories
person JanisJ
schedule March 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done! I liked how it was cool with Fleur (otherwise the sweet smut would be mixed with a bit of sadness) so it was allllll good :) And haha, she'd want to watch.... (Can I be her? ;) Great little shot of hotness-- thanks for sharing!
person Tesgura
schedule March 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit that was hot! Good job keeping Bill mostly cannon, still married to Fluer, and I can totally see and veela saying it's okay to fool around a bit with the same sex. Honestly the way I read Bill's explanation it seems like she loves him enough to see him happy. But more importantly, HOT! I hope that you do a sequel with her watching, even though I'm not much of a fan of any form of het, that sounds like it'd be awesome!
schedule March 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was so hot, thank you. I don't usually read Harry/Bill, but damn.
person Flare
schedule March 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
(pinches nose to avoid nose bleed) brilintly done really brillintly done.