rate_review Reviews

Hey, New pen name. I plan to start a new story based on Lily's later life.

I absolutely LOVE this story. It is so intense and exciting. James is major-ly creepy, hey? Poor Lily.

I'm looking forward to reading additional chapters.

VERY WELL written - keep up the good work.
:)

EEK! This story hasn't been updated since April 23, 2012. PLEASE, PLEASe, PLEAse, PLEase, PLease, Please, please don't let this story be discontinued!
T.T

Hehe sorry about assuming Draco was Lily's father. Its just the way he seemed so protective of her. But I like how you made her enjoy it. The fic should continue with her enjoying it but feeling really terrible about it. Ooohhh there could even be a part when James gets a girlfriend or a very close female friend amd Lily gets very jealous! I mean its your fic, and what you say go, but I thought that would make it a bit more interesting than it is already :)

A good story thus far. James 'taking advantage' of his sister (though she is apparently keen in later life in allowing him to do so) makes for a good story premise. The only thing that takes away from the story is that the first few chapters seem a little.... skippish, skipping around in time a little too much.

Poor Lily...but awsm story none the less! Update soon please!

Is Draco Lily's father???

would be better if they enjoyed it