rate_review Reviews

such a geat story! I absolutely hope you keep on with this brilliant story!

Oh, how I love this story! I've read the prequel to this a long time before and believed you stopped writing about it. I'm so happy to find out I was wrong. I guessed Draco's troubles doesn't seem to lessen and it's so sad that he really feels alone with no one to love him. It's quite obvious the way Melchior treated Severus and Draco differently like Severus is something precious and Draco a dirt in his shoe. I hope things will be better for Draco and that he does find someone to live for, I'm actually crying seeing him suffer like that. I thought Melchior was treating him well than he did a one eighty and deserves to be placed in the deepest darkest corner in hell eventhough, well.. er I guess that thought wasn't thought of well. Harry is still as infuriating as ever. I hope you update soon!

I liked reading up on whats been happening with Snape, although it only makes my curiosity over what Melchior did to him increase. I also really enjoyed seeing the realities of motherhood hit Hermione, it made me like her character even more. There was only one typo that really caught my attention, and it was when you wrote 1900'th century, it should be the 19th century.

This chapter was great, and I especially liked reading about Draco and his family again. I can't put my finger on it, but there's a tone to these chapters, a buildup, and I can definitely say that I can't wait to see where it's heading.

I was so excited to see a new story by you, and I was definetely not disappointed when I read this first chapter. So far you've added so much mystery that I'm literally on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens next.