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for The Boiling Point

by lundbera

person QueenB
schedule March 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 3 Why in the world does Harry keep fallinng for Draco's challenges and taunts? He should have just let the ferret pace out all night in the snow! As for Snape, he hasn't tried to teach Harry and I hope Harry's mental images show it.
schedule March 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
>_> .... -=Swats Draco with a rainbow ferret ball and drops him with Ron=- Go.. screw.. somewhere. >_>;; -=prays that Draco isn't a creepy sadist and Harry isn't defiled by the blonde pricklepear=- ;-;! And finally, cookies for the author. :D
schedule March 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I very much enjoyed what I've read so far. You definitely have a knack for humor. I'd like to add more humor to my stories, but alas, I have to get out of the romantic-drama genre! Any way, really enjoyed your plot thus far and am looking forward to the next installment. I'll be watching ;)
~Bree
person ankmet20
schedule March 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, totally different from a lot of stories you read but loving that connection between snape and harry already. can't wait to read more!!
person emma
schedule March 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! Plus for the task Draco should make Harry kiss Snape in the middle of dinner.
schedule March 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I can only imagine what Draco is going to make Harry do. Thank you for the quick update. I hope another is to come soon please.
schedule March 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
heh, har should have known better than to expect a slyth to stick to the rules. :P
I look forward to seeing the task.
schedule March 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
LoL! Harry seems to have the worst luck! I feel sorry for Severus, for having to listen to Dumbledore talk about his sex life with Grindelwald. Update soon!
person QueenB
schedule February 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1 Why didn't Harry just place a Cooling Charm on himself if it was so hot? Just wondering.

This is a revolting development. I don't remember who said that, but it seems to apply here. Ooh, I just remembered that Harry recalls the night when his mother died! Since he was only a little over a year old, he doesn't have any clear recollection about it but he did have that experience which Snape was denied. When Snape gets his first nightmare of his precious Lily's death, I hope it digs its teeth into his spiteful little soul.
person QueenB
schedule February 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 2 Poor Harry. But that conversation Snape had with Dumbledore...heh. Funny. ;D