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I am enjoying your story. I like your style of writing  and how you alternate points of view.

omg i loved it, i was laughing so hard! :D please keep writing on this one i beg you! ^^

Okaaay...that's a new one; turning Harry into a girl for losing. Interesting. And now all the hormone-driven boys are gazing lustily. Trouble is definitly brewing. And maybe Hermione has a spell for balancing on high heels (don't want to break an ankle). You know, girl stuff. :)

Great story so far.
Can't wait to see what happens next:)
Like this whole idea of telepathy between them^^

well, as punishments go, that wasn't tooooo bad. It's confusing the hell out of har though, and snape may have competition on his hands. If Grindy and dumbles had a similar connection, how did dumbles beat him? can you learn to block or at least tone down the connection?

oh wow I love!!!!!!!!!!!! this story!!! Your writing style is totally surperb. Your pacing of the action, dialogue and characters are really well written. They are totally in character and I would love to have actually seen this in the movies... well... with the exception of the groping part this would have totally fit in with the movies. Course I really like that part here lol.

Your dialogue is really fun to read and even Dumbledore who usually comes across as a flat character who just says expected lines doesn't seem that way in your story. I can totally picture him knowing everything, getting a kick out of this situation and figuring out how to use this to everyone's advantage. Really awesome story. I want you to like... sit down at your keyboard and type more... like a million pages more! :)

oh... I totally had another thought and another review reminded me... Dumbledore said that his experience made their emotions stronger and what they had felt was attraction towards each other before touching the stone and after touching the stone it increased. But Harry and Snape feel hatred towards each other... so shouldn't THAT feeling increase? At least maybe initially? Because I would imagine that hearing someones thoughts and emotions would really let you know what a person is really like and start changing some of the misconceptions they have about each other. But that would take a little bit of time.

I really loved hearing their insults to each other. It's like the teacher/student rules of respect have been forgotten and Harry and Snape are hilarious as they snipe at each other.

What an assine joke! Nice chapter.

*Needs to be put back together* Oh MY! I never thought I'd laugh so hard, I thought Harry being punished by being a girl for 12 hours was funny, but having Draco attracted to 'her' was awesome! Wonder if after the 12 hours, Draco will still feel a bit of attraction or disappointment. Ron, why does that not really surprise me? His 'logic' just shut down, and he seems to forget that 'Harriet' is actually a guy, and worse is he's treating 'Harriet' better then Hermionie. Is Sevy...jealous? ^.^ I await the next chapter eagerly!

Leania

Oh-uh! I think the teenage hormones might take over next chappie, please update again soon. I must know what will happen next.