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for Defendere

by Lomonaaeren

schedule March 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!
person Arasagi
schedule March 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I absolutely loved this one. And for once you made Draco the powerful one, not Harry. Yay for Draco getting his chance to shine.
person RS
schedule March 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was lovely! The action sequences were very well described I felt like I was watching it. Even though I want the story to continue, you concluded it well. I feel satisfied :).
person dominique1
schedule March 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really good love it draco's harry's protector and hero
person SP777
schedule March 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
After 3 days, I've finally finished this...and halfway through
I felt like Draco, I was ready to smack Harry upside the head,
'Geez Harry...get a grip already!'

But, bond or not, Harry needed to let go & I'm glad he did, sometimes
you can't be the hero ALL the time and you have to relearn to trust the
people who are around you and just realize that they just want your
friendship.

Also, I liked the tone of this story and though there is nothing new in
fanfiction, this story about bonds had a different feel to it, I think
because of the fact the boys were older in this story. I'm used to bonded
stories between teenagers. SO, this felt 'new' in a way I haven't seen in other
stories that deal with bonds.

Anyway, I'll end it here...good job. :-)
person Leania07
schedule February 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh what a lovely story! Bravo!!

Someone does need to get Harry to understand its not a burden to entrust one's friends to help and comfort them. Good job on this one!

Leania
schedule February 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
u know... i'm a bit disappointed. i was looking forward to getting to the bottom of the story so i could find out who the author was and go read the rest of their stories... and then it turned out to be you Loma and i've already read the vast majority of them. how do you do it, constantly bring forth unique and individual stories using the same characters. said it before and i;ll say it again. you're just amazing. ty for sharing.