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for What Lies Beneath

by Kitty_Savella

person Melissa
schedule November 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really like it so far I hope it becomes a three way with Draco, Harry and Severus. Hope to c more of little Teddy. Please update soon thank u.
schedule March 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
RL can be troublesome sometimes, ty for getting it up at all. Sorry Dray, they're right, that's just creepy.
schedule February 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
yay they made up... though this seems to lack a bit of continuancy so far. It's almost like snap shots... i know, i know it's only three chappies in and unless its a one shot story line takes a bit to build. well, that answers my q's on mio and ron then. good thing he's got teddy to anchor him or har might honestly have suicided i think.
schedule February 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
winces.
har really stabbed himself in the hand with that one.
still, i reckon sev is going to be miserable too.
so are ron and mio dead or gone in another sense?
sounds like this one will be messy. looking forward to mmore. ^^
person Leania07
schedule February 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hmm interesting, kinda made me a bit teary eyed. Can't wait to see where you take this!

Leania
schedule February 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good first chapter. You pulled me in and can't wait for next chapter.