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by LadyFreak

person MotekElm
schedule March 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Good story. Nicely complete. Romantic. Draco is a little too OOC fluffy. I think Ron is a wanker but he is also a little OOC violent. Nice weaving of depression and cutting into a Dramione. 

schedule December 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written. It was so real; your experience with depression shows. I loved it.
person cpetnm
schedule August 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was very believable that H would fight depression after the war. Thank you for the story!
schedule March 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, I'm so sorry I haven't kept up with this story! I had spring break and some other things come up and haven't been able to read for awhile. I love the ending <3 like other people have said it was nice that you made it more real, making her depression a lifelong concern rather than just wrapping it up. Plus a few chapters ago, that steamy action between Draco and Hermione was amazing. You have a knack for writing smut ;-p I am excited to read more stories by you (hopefully you write more too, lol) keep up the Greta work.

~ SarahBear
schedule March 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well shit. Now I need a new box of tissues. That was a great ending because it's a loooong process out of depression. There are no easy fixes. Very true ending. Excellent work. Now I've just got to get mine done!
schedule March 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aw! That was so cute! Makes me sad it is over. But I now have something new to look forward too as of today, don't I? ^^
schedule March 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMGlob!!! Awesome fic. Loved it. I love how he sang to her and called her baby. That was deep. I loved this. I hope you will go on to creating more with this couple and hope to read more of your work in the future. Congrats on finishing this fic. Loved it.
schedule March 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! AWESOME STORY

I love how you didn't make it all disappear, but kept it so that it made a point that it's never fully cured
schedule March 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
that was a great way to end the story, i really enjoyed reading it
schedule March 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What do I think? I think this story should come with its own theme music.
Dun dun DUN! :D
Now, quit hold out and post the next chapter!!!