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for Coming Home to You

by freakenbree

schedule March 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am happy for the update and can't wait for the bonding ceremony. I hope all goes well and Harrys' friends are happy for him. Hope the see another update soon please.
schedule March 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow fast update love it. I am glad Severus is willing to stay with Harry. They love each other. Hope things turn out alright for the both of them and I can't wait for the metion of little Severus'. Update again soon please.
person Leania07
schedule March 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh, a creature in heat, that would explain the multiple romp fests occurring what seems to be daily for them. Another wonderful chapter(s), and I wanted to smack Dumbledore for interrupting them. How Rude!!! I await the next!

Leania
person Leania07
schedule March 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh very nicely done, now that I got caught up on the last two chapters. I'm liking how Sevy's trying to show his feelings just a bit more; for someone who's been rather jaded and acerbic over the years one can't expect him to become snuggly/lovey-dovey over night. Perhaps not ever to that extreme (though one can always dream hm?) but its good to see an attempt and an admission of sorts. School is going to be interesting, and if Voldie ever catches wind of Harry's...condition...how will he react. I'm sure this isn't the last we'll hear of Lucius, however. Good job, and I await the next chapter!

Leania
schedule March 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well I am glad that they are going to bond, but I hope they get along fine. Hope more is to come soon please. Thanks for the update.
person Leania07
schedule March 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh I like this! I saw what you did there with the name ;) Of course Sevy would be drawn to such a beautiful dark creature, he seems one of a dark nature himself. I had to laugh, Dumbledor isn't just a senile, meddling, old coot; he has such a devious plan up his sleeve. Why Sevy, he's playing off your jealousy of Lucius being close to Harry to get you to agree. Kinda like using a cattle prod to get him to acknowledge things, but effective. Another good chapter, and I await the next. I loved the Sevy POV btw.

Leania
schedule March 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Okay I am sooo glad that they admitted to loving each other. Harry needs to mention lucius more if it makes Sev jealouse and makes them have rough schmex. Thank you for the update. Hope more is to come soon.
schedule March 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well I am glad he admits he loves Harry. And admit that you never truly forget your first love, so I hope Sev will be happy with harry and not be so caught up with Lily. Also I don't really mind the dark skin, but you are right. He has to learn to control it first. I am surprised it turned on Sev so much. Cute. Well Thank you for the quick update and hope that you will update soon please.
schedule March 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am happy that severus has accepted Harry the way he is, and can see this contdition is going to bring a lot of good couplings to come...not sure i like the charcoal skin, kinda sounds like he's a demon or something...But I guess thats the point, huh? Well am loving it so far hope you update again soon please.
schedule March 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well I am glad that they share their feelings. And I don't blame Sev for wanting to kill Harry's uncle, aunt, and cousin. I am glad that he saw them finally. I was expecting a volcano of a blow out but I am glad it's in the open. I hope things will go well for the two when they tell the others about the two of them. I think Dumbledore knew it would happen like this. Letting Lucius court Harry so he could run into the arms of Severus. That man never ceases to amaze.

Great update. I hope another will come soon. Please and Thank You.