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for Broken Dreams

by onecelestialbeing

schedule July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering when she was going to find out about Lily. I can't wait to see what happens next. Sorry I am so late in reviewing. It was brilliantly written as always.
schedule July 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my oh my oh my! This story has kept me RIVETED, positively, and I am just sick (figuratively) thinking what is going to happen next. I hope Hermione is mature enough not to pull what she did the first time, running from him, and from what you've written it seems to be she's grown up a little, knowing she needs to face him head on. She is a clever girl, but it does not bode well for Severus that this is the second thing he's kept from her that is important to their relationship and he needs to define it. I hope she demands a definition and that he steps up to the plate, but we can hardly hope for a neat tie-up closure to this little predicament in a properly written drama/angst fanfic story, can we? Heheh........ well, all I can do is wait and see. Wonderfully written and played!
person Anon
schedule July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
my favorite Severus and Hermione story <3
person FunnyDays
schedule July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh--- Lily. I cant wait for the rest! One of the best Severus Hermione stories ever! You write them in an amazing way :)
schedule July 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Tottttaaallllyyy called the pairs in chapter 15.
person anyesha
schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hey don't disappear after giving such a wonderful and griping story please.................. chapter 22 please please............
schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another lovely chapter, even with her heartbreak. I know Severus feels he is in love with her, but after this, he MUST offer up some of himself and his own truths if he wants to hold on to her. I hope she gives him the chance and he doesn't blow it. Thank you! HG4eva
schedule July 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOO
How can you end like that?
It's so mean!!!!
Please write soon!
I want to know what happens when Hermione gets home and when she confronts him.
I can't wait to see what all happens and I hope it won't be long before I do find out.
person anyesha
schedule July 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
its so amazing really.........................................i am so happy about the new chapter......i hope hermione and severus can solve their problem........ love them soo much
schedule July 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
bum bum bum... I can't wait to see her confront Severus about Lily! I am sure drama will ensue! :)