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for Broken Dreams

by onecelestialbeing

person Mrs_HH
schedule August 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love it and as always more is required!
schedule August 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love their love. :-) And, I truly enjoy her friends. lol Thank you! HG4eva
schedule August 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely love the continuation of this story. Was super glad to see our dark wizard and know it all witch make up, get sick from one another *classic!* and sharing all the good natured drama and bantering with friends. Well done!
person Missycam
schedule August 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh I'm so relieved they're on good terms now
Thanks for the lemon :-P

Update soon please ;-)
schedule August 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!! Thank you. I loved his apology and his declaration of his feelings. Perfect! And, I also loved that she didn't back down and just accept whatever he was willing to give. This is a couple that will make it once they get past themselves to find their happy place. :-) Thank you again! HG4eva
schedule August 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What a super duper hot hot hot make up, and I LOVE how he came and took charge of the situation and broke up the squabbling. I wish Arthur had more balls though and kept his wife in check. Good on Narcissa for figuring it out LOL!! Here is a tribute I made to your story! http://tinyurl.com/snapehermione
person anyesha
schedule August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
that was amazing..........i feel so relieved that my favourite wizard and his whitch has solved their problems soooooooo cutely......................
person ShannonE
schedule August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
LOL...ok-- Now where's chapter 25?

More...please :-(
person ShannonE
schedule July 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
"I'm going to overlook the fact that you've just compared me to the boy wonder and speckled idiot..."

OH MY GOD! That is absolutely priceless. If that line were in the original books or movies, it would have become an INSTANT classic!

Forget, "I'll be back" or "Say hello it my little friend..." or "Show me the Money"...

That line is so perfect and perfectly Snape!

VERY well done!

Can't wait for Chapter 24!
person ShannonE
schedule July 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just left you a "review", but I also just added a comment and a link to your story on my blog at "Pasionate Reads".

I mentioned another HP story as well in the orginal posting on "FanFiction", and came across yours afterward.

I enjoyed it so much, I wanted to comment on it.

Hope you don't mind and check out the blog is you get a chance!

Here's the link if you're interested:

http://passionatereads.com/2012/07/29/adult-fanfiction-fantasy-on-roids/#comment-6021

ShannonE