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for Broken Dreams

by onecelestialbeing

schedule March 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh, i can't wait for more!
schedule March 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Okay this has become a bit interesting. Hope you update again soon.
person Leania07
schedule March 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting so far, I'm curious to see where this goes. Keep up the good work ^.^

Leania
schedule February 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story so far...and keeping to character is nice.... Sometimes people get carried away i feel like its different people. Lol i hope for more soon. And a little u know.... *wiggles eyebrows* yeahhhhhh lol
schedule February 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loving this story!!! Looking forward to the next chapters!!! Keep up the GREAT work!!!

Hugs, TCQ
schedule February 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A very nice beginning. I feel badly for her and spent all three chapters alternating between wanting to slap him, scream in his face, or shake my head at him. I look forward to seeing you let him relax enough to not be the snarky jerk he's been, while you help her through her grief. I also want to understand how Harry and Ron just let her go like that. I am glad you gave her support in Ginny and Luna, though. Thanks! HG4eva