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I am glad she is taking this all so well. I wouldn't have blamed her no matter her decision, but I hope she will be okay with it in the coming months. As much as I want to hurt the Malfoys, I could cheerfully punch Ron in the face and then kick in the groin! No matter the hurt he felt, that was unbelievable! If she never forgives him, it will be too soon. Wow and sigh... But, I am very glad Molly, Severus, Harry and Ginny stood by her and will be there to help support her as she learns to be a mother. Can whoever the visitor is to the Malfoys slap them around a little? They (No-Remorse-Lucius more than Draco) deserve to suffer for what they did, even if it is Ron doing the punishing. Thank you for this and I like the name Bennett. HG4eva

really enjoying this! really glad you don't plan to draw out some of the in-between years, too :)

Wonderful begining~! Are you planning to play with both Malfoy's? Anyone you decided this will be delicioso!

Awesome awesome start, and I love long chappies too! Glad to see that Lucius and Draco weren't down with the abuse and I can't wait to see what happens.

Woah....That was interesting and intense.... I hope you post more sooooon. This seems like a good read

i love the fist chapter!!!! i am so looking forward to the next chapter and i love long chapters so i am grateful! :) i am also just happy that you said that you will be posting later in the week and that makes me happy--very happy! i look forward many more chapters to come! i also have a question and one concern ?-will you have hermione accept and will she be breastfeading (sorry i like to see-well read the mother-baby bonding thing)the baby boy? and the concern i have is that i hope that you will not be skipping any time that things will progress and that if you must not to do a lot of time. i am really looking forward to the charater development in the story too! :) post soon!!

I find it interesting that Snape didn't tell Lucius about the baby. Was there an underlying reason or did he feel that Lucius doesn't have the right to know? I'm intrigued, I'll be awaiting the next chapter eagerly.

I really liked the first chapter. Theres plenty of room for plot I just hope that while we know lucy is indeed slytherin to the core he did everything he though would protect his family.please dont pick a silly name for the new Malfoy addition.

Wonderful start! I really didnt enjoy the rape, but i understand it was a nesecary evil to move the story along. Cant wait t what happens when others find out! Also, poor hermione, how will she handle being a mom?!

Hi. Did I hate it? Absolutely, not! Was it good? Oh, yes! But, how on earth you are going to make this a Lucius/Hermione story is completely beyond me. What he did was not only cruel and horrible, but he was completely unrepentant! Draco at least showed regret during and remorese afterward. He at least spoke of wanting forgiveness. Lucius's words to Severus were those of a man who had little care for what he did other than that it was convenient and good for him and his son. He has ZERO care about Hermione, her mental state, or what even happened to her. And, poor Hermione! Not only does she have to live with that awful event, she also has to look into the face and eyes of her rapists in her child every day and care for him. Add to that that you took the movie arm carving and made that part of her suffering, too.... Good Lord, how will she ever come back from this?! She's punished, branded for life and may never recover, Merlin, I want to kill them for this. Having said all of that, I look forward to seeing you try to make her life not as horrific as it is now. You're writing was very descriptive and well done and your storytelling skills are great! I await the next update and thank you, HG4eva