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for Count Your Blessings

by LadyOfTheNight

person Citten
schedule May 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
well i cant wait to see what happens next! draco well the question is he going to be curious enough to go look at the tapastry or even go back to the manor in general. poor narcissa, i do feel very bad for the poor woman. i am glad that we did get to enjoy a little severus and hermione but now i am ready to see where hermoine is going to go next and i am excited to see more of little bennett! please post soon!! :)
schedule May 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! Could you please set the story to regular screen instead of wide.... Thank you!
schedule May 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ah, so Ron killed Narcissa..... really hope that in a future chapter they nail his ass for that, because that was just not necessary in the slightest. It's surprising that there wasn't more investigation. I am betting that when the evidence of the name missing from the Malfoy tapestry comes out in the future, that they will get more suspicious of what actually happened.
schedule May 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
First, HAVE A BLAST!!!! I want to go back to the park and get a job as the trolley cart lady. lol I miss butterbeer... I hope you enjoy it as much as I did. :-)

Next, thank you for the update. It was lovely to see her first foray into freely desired and given sex be such a wonderful, giving experience. I am very happy for her and proud of her for being a MUCH better person than any human I know. I wouldn't have been that kind. I know she's choosing to do nothing and let "what will be be", but that in itself is pretty darn amazing. I don't feel bad for Ron, but I am glad he is trying to make amends, no matter how small.

Last, thank you again for the update. It was lovely and I look forward to more soon! Thanks, hon! HG4eva
person Citten
schedule April 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
well i am torn that you stopped the date before it happen at the same time i am really glad that you stopped it from happening. i love severus and hermione stories too, but in this case it is about our lovely lucius and hermione and am dying to see where this goes now! i am really excited to see where this goes next!!! :) post soon!
person Sera21
schedule April 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I like the detail and the way that Snape is so in character. I was wondering about Rons involvement in Narcissas death tho. Did he tell her about the baby and then watch her kill herself ?? It seems pretty wierd for somebody as private as Narcissa was to kill herself in front of a Weasley...plus, why was she only found 3 months later???Don't the house-elves clean the rooms every day??
person Carousel
schedule April 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear god I love this story. Please update soon and give me some more Severus and Hermione snogging.
schedule April 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow- Snape has some bad timing! Or maybe just the news is bad timing. Story is still awesome, though, I don't know how you are going to turn it around into Lucius/Hermione, but that is the reason I am not a writer!
person Citten
schedule April 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i will stay turned with great pleasure! i am so excited and i am dying to read all that you say is to be in the next chapter and i am hoping it is soon!!! :) great chapter by the way and i love your writing and am looking forward to more lots more!!! :)
schedule April 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi there. I always get so happy to see your update. You have me captured with this story. lol I don't know what your next few chapters will bring, but I will be here waiting. :-) Thank you! HG4eva