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July 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am so hooked on this story, very well plotted and written.
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July 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I do hope more is coming soon???
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July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like your story and the fact that you are not instantly turning Lucius into a good guy and that its more of a process...however I believe that your depiction of the toddlers is a bit off at times. They certainly have a rather large vocab for such young children. Most children of 3 can string together short easy sentences but nothing like the comparably large sentences and syntax structures that Bennet knows...they also often make word choice errors and use incorrect regular syntax for irregular verbs for instance...
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July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The break up was expected.... I just wonder how is going to go from when she gets out of Hogwarts.... This will be very interesting to see... keep them coming please1
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July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo lol, oh well as long as she doesn't end up with one of the malfoy's, I'm content. more please
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July 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I will be waiting anxiously for chapter ten. I can't wait to see how severus does at the burrow.
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July 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter
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July 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is awesome! I will be checking back for ch 10 I can't wait to see what happens!!!!
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July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
love it, seriously hoping she stays with Severus, I just cant see her pairing up with either of the Malfoy's at this point. There is a limit to forgiveness. more please
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June 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
love it cant wait to read more please update soon