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Ohh I really wonder what plan Charlie is going to come up with.
Hopefully it's successful :D
I want Firnir to be caught and I hope he doesn't hurt Hermione or Benny.
I wonder how Draco and Lucius are going to get through things.

Otra cosa,

hey can u add me 2 your alert list? Your story is absolutly fabulous, its the first lucius/hermione story ive ever read and its also the only aff story ive ever read, plz update soon .LadyNite

Hi,

I found your story yesterday and I was so delighted to find a good long and plot-wise very promising story in the Lucius-Hermione departement here!
I absolutely love everything about it! (well, except that it's not complete yet ;) )
Somehow I even guessed that there was going to be some trouble with Fenrir breaking out... and I have some guesses as to whats going to happen now...

I am really looking forward to reading more of your story! Hopefully there will be more...
Wish you a nice week,
blacky

"turning your son over to a psychopathic dictator, torturing and raping young girls were all things he did while being but under a huge amount of stress and pressure".

sooooooooooooooo not an excuse lol, love the story and sorry if I am being 'that guy' with my constant reviews speaking negatively of malfoy but Lucius just really rustles my jimmies(or grinds my gears/pisses me off etc). Draco at least looks back on his actions and is trying to find some form of redemption but still carries a certain arrogance about him while Lucius has done FAR to much to ever atone. Again love the story and i am not trying to flame, i have just never been to much of a pro-malfoy kind of guy and its a testament to your skills as a writer that i continue to read.

(waits patiently for the next chapter)

I hate sevvy and mione didn't make it but hey at least let him find someone that he can love later. I can't wait to see how Malfoy will act once he meets Benny cause Draco could only see how proud the kid was soooo keep up the great writing and I'll wait for an update.

Wow. Thank you. lol I had to go back and see what I wrote to make sure I hadn't offended you by mistake. :-) I am glad she is taking the break up well and that she understands that, though very sad, it's for the best. Ginny actually made me laugh, as her tantrum was so normal, but ridiculous. lol Draco's fight to get his father out was admirable, but I am with his lawyer in fearing the affect of Lucius' release on Draco and his future. I know he can't see it, but this could go badly. And, with the escape of Fenrir (why the hell is he still alive to escape?!) I can't imagine the upcoming horrors. Thanks for the update! HG4eva

How sad. I am glad they ended as someday-friends, but I am so sad that her life is nothing like she'd hoped. I feel badly for Severus, too, as letting her go shows just how much he really loved her. His apology was perfect. I am also happy about her working with Charlie and George. She needs some levity and happiness. She's too young to be so old. Thank you again, HG4eva

i loved the chapter! now we can get on with the good stuff!!! Right? I also have no problem if it is more than 5 more chapters! in fact i am counting on it! PLEASE!!! i really love the story and i want it longer! post soon!! :)