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September 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really?
This was terrible.
This was terrible.
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February 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story, I liked seeing a different setting and I loved that you let Snape look like a normal (albeit ver sexy) person! My only real complaint is that there seemed to be an emotional gap between the fight Snape and Potter had after the first time they had sex and the fact that they more or less got along without large tension in the hole kitchen and sleep potion scenes. I would have liked to have seen you see them struggle with trusting each other more, leading up to the big reveal at the end.
Oh, and I suppose my second complaint is that this is a one shot. I'd love to see you write more!
Oh, and I suppose my second complaint is that this is a one shot. I'd love to see you write more!
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February 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is your first? It is nicely done. Love it and it was sweet. Hope you make more.
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February 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story was very sweet. I especially liked the subplot of Voldemort finding them. That needs to be explored more. Maybe in a sequel?