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person Mehla_Seraphim
schedule March 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hhmmm...So if this is a memory erasing Twisted, then was that floaty paper at the beginning being held by them, but the blanked out the person holding it so it just drifted down? I'm so confuzzled lol.
person SP777
schedule March 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #5...

Whooops...and here we go again! :-)

With a guy like Harry, it's going to be a never ending headache...and
what happened to 'protecting the innocent' from those murderers? When
you have concrete evidence they did it?

...such a freakin' conflict here.
person SP777
schedule March 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #4...

I knew it! I KNEW there was something off about Nancy, now the question is..what exactly did she do? O_o
...and our man of the hour, Draco, would have picked up on it quicker and to think Harry doesn't want to
obliterate their ass'ets off the planet. *tsk*
schedule March 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hmmm,I wonder what blue eyes gains by tossing such baits to har... and speaking of bait, do malfoys parents really expect him to leap for theirs? would he just give har over like that? I think not.
person SP777
schedule March 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #3...

Whooa! O_o

When did this turn ugly? Oh. that's right...right about the
beginning when Harry started channeling Hermione.

What is wrong with him??? Not everything is cut & dry when it
comes to twisted, my dear Harry, but I have to say both men are
right AND wrong. Some twisted might deserve a simple capture, but
somwhere down the road you ARE going to encounter a few where extreme
force...or a permanent solution.. is necessary.

I just hope both of them learn how to balance it out in the end.

How would they act if they separated on the personal front, knowing how
much they feel for each other?
schedule March 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
winces. wow, that's quite a difference in moral ground... and it's going to be a prob, i can see it.
person SP777
schedule February 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #2...

Oh my God...is Harry about to get all self-concious about
hunting twisted now? Shoot, that will hamper the need to get
rid of the twisted completely if they pose a MAJOR threat to
the Aurors, if HArry wants to be..I dunno..understanding of
the plights of the twisted or some such nonsense.

I say he needs to get a grip & I'm sure Draco agrees.
schedule February 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
now that's interesting. why would the tapestry pull poor har outta bed. why would their colleagues start giving them the hairy eyeball just cause the haven;t announced they're dating yet either?
person SP777
schedule February 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
''Morning star''..hmmm. Why does that name seem so familiar? I know
I've heard of that before.

Anyway, nice start...MacGeorge is going to be a nice lil' headache, though
she seemed to contradict herself in her questioning of Draco, by acting like at first
she was trying to get Draco to confirm her suspicions, then turns around & act likes
she knows. I say...keep her in the dark, she only has her suspicions.

By the way, curious to know what got Harry up at night...