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by Lomonaaeren

person W
schedule April 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god... I really didn't see that one coming, even though in retrospect I probably should have... Not erasing herself from the mind of others but even other people, how devious...

I'm simply speechless... I can't find a way to describe the admiration I feel for your imagination. You manage to come up with things that have never existed before and tie them into the fandom, with partly familiar characters, to create not only something totally new but something that takes the whole fandom further... I don't know if I managed to say what I think^^ I probably didn't...

Oh well, let's just say that you are a genius and unique and a blessing to every devoted H/D shipper! And when you consider the way you tie plot with introspection and action, well, it's just unheard of... THANKS YOU!!
schedule April 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
that's downright scary. having someone you love deeply just erased from your memories like that. still, that might be part of the reason har was pulled to the black tapestry. interesting how she sees draco as the dangerous one.
person SP777
schedule April 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #9...

I think I feel sorrier for Harry, because Draco seems to be doing just fine! :-D
You know, I htought for sure you would have had Healer Portillo go to the other
Aurors in the Socrates Co. to confirm any suspicions she may have had...and killed
the doubt in Harry's mind inthe process.

Is it just me or is Auror Macgeorge somewhat 'nicer' w/o Draco there?
schedule April 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
gooooooo draco! You dump that parental dead weight! Still, i'm most interested to see how the family tapestry and maybe the family black itself tie into this.
person SP777
schedule April 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #8...

1. You know, I can definitely see Harry writing in a diary, 'Dear Diary Draco
is such an ARSE! Do you know what he said to me???...and then he said THIS..and
THEN he said THAT!!!' Yep, I can definitely see Harry doing that, which is why I think
that is completely hilarious! :-D

2. Draco can't leave well enough alone, can he?

3. I forgot something had called Harry a few chapters back...& why do I get the feeling that
The Malfoys DO have something to do with Nancy or it's possible they were associated with her
at one time?

..and don't think I didn't notice what was omitted towards the end there, I almost didn't
catch it. :-p I want to know if anyone else noticed...the question is why is it important for
Harry to forget THAT particular detail. Could Harry be a 'personal' threat to Nancy...or is
Draco a 'personal' threat?
person SP777
schedule March 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #7...

1. Damn, this the beginning had 'crime drama' written all over it, I almost
expected them to drag her a$$ downtown for not giving the right answer! :-)

2. These words popped up in my head during the second part, 'Trust...not an easy thing
you say. Never thought the game of love this way you'd play, by the things you do,
never thought these things I would go through with you. Pain, trickery, & deceit all the wrongs
that you put me through, if you don't wanna say...still love you anyway...' etc.

..and for the record, yes, they're words from a song. Because when Draco started pressing Harry
for answers about Hale, it was like the trust had been broken.
schedule March 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh, oh draco. Next time LISTEN to that voice. it's there for a reason.
i just hope he hasn't irreparably broken them. in trying to chase down reassurance, he's manage to alienate the one he wants. No telling which way har will bounce now.
person SP777
schedule March 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #6...

*rubs hands gleefully* Ooo...now we're getting somewhere!
Have I mentioned I love intrigue? :-)
schedule March 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh, oh, that is sooooo not good. messing with time can come back to bite you in soooooo many different ways. So, it'll be interesting to see. is this memory wipe effect part of the latest twisted's power or due to the time bites. the notes too.
well, at least har and malfoy aren't arguing atm.
schedule March 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
keeping your parents AND har on side... good luck with that dray, but I get the feeling that might blow up in your face rather explosively. not to mention the philosophical differences he and har are having. and the new twisted they're hunting. I wonder if blue eyes will feature much in this one.