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Hello again. :-) Wow, you certainly know how to surprise a person. lol Welcome back. I hope your break has been a good one. This was a fun chapter and I look forward to more whenever you put it up. :-) Thanks, HG4eva

I'm really having a blast at the openness of Draco's change of sides. I also love the initiation into the Order, although I'm surprised how so many seem to know about it. Can't wait to see others' initiation marks or to at least learn their animals/creatures.

Thanks for writing!

I like the concept of this story and can't wait to see what happens next.

I'm glad you reposted for I do like this tale...

o great a nother ron asshole story, you know what funny is that when harry was saying draco was a death eather, ron and hermoine both deffend him. so in cannon harry more the hate draco and belive he a death eater not ron. just dont make hermoine some weak girl, if you going to do bdsm, she should be the master, it would fit better.

love the plot.. can't wait to find how ginny, ron & harry will react will their find out abour draco!!

I still think you've got a nice story going. I like the characters you've built and the reasoning you've given Draco for changing. I like a hot-headed silly Ron, so it's all good with me. lol I am glad you're looking for a beta, as they would help you see the things you might have missed in your own editing. If it helps, when I write a story, I then read each chapter out loud to myself (of course mumbling the dirtier parts lol) to see if it flows like a normal conversation would, before posting it. I often find one or two more things to edit then. :-) Thanks again and good luck in uni! HG4eva

Just got caught up on my reading and saw your update. I am really glad you're continuing this story and I look forward to more soon. Congrats on n your new girlfriend. Thanks, HG4eva

What a wonderful start. I hope you can update soon, I love where this is heading so far. Very well written.

your story is down