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July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this version as much as the other one but I like this in that Lupin is alive, and I love him as a father-figure. I loved Sirius, but he was not a father to Harry in the way he needed, he was more the older brother that gets into a lot of trouble with the adults. But keep writing I love your style.
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July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please please please please update. I'm desperate to know what happens next!
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May 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So cool cant wait for more!!!!
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May 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hey i love that you got some answers in there cuase the story can't move on without them.i think ram really got out of line for a bit there. oh and about punishment i think a lot of little details are what really makes the story like what they say about the movies it is the littler details that make the movies more realistic like how they show buck beaks claw dip into the water. anyway love your stories and can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!
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May 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think those small things are a part of Harry's life at the moment. His twins are the centre of his universe and if you don't write small silly things about them then it just doesn't seem realistic. I think despite what most people think, they are important and you should include them.
However, please don't make the entire chapter about them, we have been desperately waiting for the good stuff. Make sure the story moves forward and all the small things are okay :)
However, please don't make the entire chapter about them, we have been desperately waiting for the good stuff. Make sure the story moves forward and all the small things are okay :)
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May 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE this story. Punishment is good, but I couldn't handle the thought of Harry killing Remus. Please continue with this one as well! I love it!!!!
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May 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hmmm, that's one detail they didn't have to deal with in 'punishment' since V had already been and seen har. filler chappies are important too since they give us background and such.
as for punishment, don't fight so hard. let it flow and if it's filling up with little side points, let it. get to the end of the chappie and if your not happy, then you can trim as you need. Myself, i don't mind the little side points. its not like har is up for doing much more until the dom's get back. just don't forget to move the plot forward as well.
as for punishment, don't fight so hard. let it flow and if it's filling up with little side points, let it. get to the end of the chappie and if your not happy, then you can trim as you need. Myself, i don't mind the little side points. its not like har is up for doing much more until the dom's get back. just don't forget to move the plot forward as well.
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April 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love both of these stories you have written :) I hope to read more soon. If you're still looking I wanted to offer my services as a beta. I have not written a story of my own but I have been a beta once before of ff.net. I am also on here it there everyday so I will be accesable. Let me know if you're interested. We can talk more over email.
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April 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Can't wait for an update. If possible, i think i like this one better than Punishment. :)
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April 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i love fg/hp. very nice start. i am currently reading your story punishment. please update soon