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Brilliant. Simply, brilliant. Love your work on this fanfiction so far. Your grammar is good, your spelling is well-checked, and your story-telling ability thus far has exceeded my highest expectations. Keep up the good work, Lissy.

Just read up to chapter 4 and have to say that the Dursleys never deserve redemption. The way they treated a small and defenceless boy is shameful. Looking forward to the next chapter.

This is so entertaing, and well written! Please keep this up! <3

If Dumbledore read that letter, as he implied by mentioning Petunia would have known about the house if she read it, then Dumbledore know's about them switching the Secret Keeper to Peter.

perhaps nightmares, where they experience everything har has gone through as if they were har... oh, and something so they can't lay a hand on him anymore without consequences. And they should DEFINITELY lose the house. Perhaps being bought up on charges of child abuse and neglect? is there a magical version?
would the blood wards drop now that she's denied har as family? They so need someone else to become har's guardian. Pity they don't know about Siri yet. Or contacting remi.
You've show the contrast between the two sets of family very nicely.

Kill them with Voldemort torture!!!

they need to be punished...more please.

great work so far. Keep the updates coming.

I don't normally read Harry/Hermione Fan Fiction but I rather like this one. I hope you update soon!

this is really interesting. I think V might have jumped the gun a bit. in frying his host he's now left as a bodiless spirit again neh? oh dear, the crap is really going to splatter with the dursleys. on the plus side, they won't be able to beat up on har with out mio knowing, yeah? or starve him too much.
moving the stone and not having V about is going to really alter things i think. I wonder if the weasleys will be as important now that he's bonded to mio.
looking forward to more.