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for Branching Out

by harrypegger

schedule March 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Roen = Harry under polyjuice. That's all I'm saying.
person TomOfDC
schedule March 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nope, didn't like this chapter. Hermione wouldn't cheat on Ron, even if it to try something she has never done. Sorry, but no.
schedule March 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ron does have a point his girlfriend should have told him, and ron and hermoine did not formaly brake up so she cheated on him, wish ron and hermoine would stay together, or at least have sex.
schedule March 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hopefully Hermione tries out a witch?
person kaikunnn
schedule March 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i love your story i can't wait for the next chapter and are you going to make the main pairing a threesome between harry hermione and ginny cuase that would be awesome and hot and would work so well with what chapter 3 showed about there friendship and relationship between the three your fan kaii
person TomOfDC
schedule March 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
There is only one way I would approve of this story is if Roen turns out to be Ron with polyjuice. I mean, come on. The name is Roen? Take the e away, and well that's obvious.
schedule March 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i agree that this story doesn't need to drag out much more...a little more reaction when she is shopping in Diagon Alley and some closure with Ron, good or bad as long as he knows they are done and over with...great job with the short story
schedule March 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really hot!
I'll be lying if I said I wasn't a little disappointed that there wasn't a little sex involved with a faceless dude during her photoshoot though :p
person kylanSB
schedule March 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
more please
person kylanSB
schedule March 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
is this going to be a harry/hermione shipper? if so woohoo. although i wouldn't mind if hermione experience around with other characters now that shes putting herself out there. anyway great chap, and hope harry/pansy would get updated soon!