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for Lost in the Music

by Daydreamer

schedule February 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i glad you fix ron and hermoine friend ship, hope he stay in the story, have you show where they do talk and hang out some times.,maybe she could even set him up with a girl.

i do belive ron would kill them, why blase may be dangerous, and draco a caward who will only do something if he belives he would not get cault, ron would take a knife and stabb both of them to death, and he do it in the great hall, infront of every body.


questions, the yale ball was in 4 book, ron dating lavendor was in 6, so not sure what year they are in.

ginny kind of a bitch, hermoine call ron names all the time, what draco did was worse should could defend her brother at least some times.
schedule February 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
As much of a ill tempered jerk Ron can be Im glad he appologised. So Blaise invited Ginny because hes starting to notice her. I love how Draco lced his fingers with Hermonie and called her princess, no doubt that he would be a charmer with the LUCKY lady he decided to settle down with. I wonder how Lucy is going to take to the news!
schedule February 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
If ever girl got a heart fet appology from a man lik that their would be alot less pissed off coupls and more babies......thats a baby makin appology! I DO love suprises......HATE the wait, hubbs is always doing that.....dont be like him.
schedule February 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loveloveloved the date scene. Im seeing a future with ginny and blaise.....he DID notice her prettyness even with smuged makeup and hungover, if that isnt love then i need to find a different husband! Draco is aware tht hermonie can sing but is unaware of her alterego so perhaps hell have a fun flirty date like karaoke or even something to show his acceptance towards muggle dates (go karting mini golf.....maybe he could get her on a romantic broom ride over the grounds while looking at the natural beauty) so many options!
schedule February 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hermonie was kind of a bitch, she gave no hint, of her likeing ron, so how is he to blame, draco is a jerk, they have every reason to hate him, if draco really cared about hermoine he would try to be friend, say he sorry,

the girl you love, is not dating the guy that hurt your made fun of you, and he a jerk for not liking it, well if i had my way she dumb draco and blase and date ron, but she need to understand why doing this,

good story, hate ron bashing,
schedule February 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
dont understand hermoine, she cant be ron firend why, becouse he hate her dating the two guy that are jerk, she tell him not going to pine over you, he does not want her to pine he WANT TO DATE HER, if she hermoine is smart she would date ron, thank about if ron the rigth guy, witch i know he wont be in this story, she will know, and if he is she find out, that way who ever she chooice, she will no she made the right chooice.

i not trying attack you, hate ron bashing, hate that destory there friendship, and hate that ron alwasy the bad guy, she was the one that blame him, did not tell him how she felt, and let him find out this way,

you can love who ever you wnat, but he still go to prison, the only way either draco or blase should have a chance with hermoine if they sorry and nice to there friend, yes even ron,

good story.
schedule February 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The smut was good. TY. Theres something to be said about a woman who doesnt know how amazing she is. Poor Draco doesnt stand a chance if hes tossing it....Hermonie is going to keep him on his toes for sure. Do us proud and embrace the vixen. I feel so sad for Pansy,never thought Id say it.
person TomOfDC
schedule February 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hope Ron kills both Draco and Blaise.
schedule February 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ive always though ron was a jerk....he doesnt have the emotional range of a teaspoon more like a thimble. As always enjoyed the new installment. Already know whos going to picked...it wouldnt be in this section! Its not the destination but the jucy juicy stuff inbetween called smut and romance
schedule February 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love where this is going, I just wish the chapters were longer.