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for Lost in the Music

by Daydreamer

schedule April 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I Love this story. I understand your need for finishing you college work. That unfortunately needs to come first. I will anxiously await your next chapter. I would not feel to bad about reviews...I had to create a login to be able to write this maybe others just don't want to do that. Looking forward to your next few chapters.
schedule April 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Daydreamer, I have been absolutely loving your stories! I really hope you keep continuing writing them. I'm a pretty new member, but I keep checking back alot to see if there's any updates. I'm a fan.
schedule March 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this good,, pansy and ron, part i could see what ever else ron is he does defend those he loves.

hermione should feel a little guilty, is it just me, but ginny and hermoine have seem to stop being friend with ron and harry as you never see them talk. or hangout.

schedule March 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic!! I love how this is coming along! Looking forward to more!
schedule March 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I felt so moved by dracos words. yeah hes a fictional person,but damned if he were real(not tom felton) im pretty sure hed be exactly what every chick dremt him as
schedule March 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
YES i love it!!!!
amazing!!!
ITS LOVE <3
schedule March 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ummm, WOW! I didn't see that coming! I am definitely looking forward to MORE!
schedule March 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh darling...

I had abandoned AFF for a while and figured I'd venture back to take a peek at what's going on--might I just say at first I was a little skeptical. Err..I shudder to write (well type) that but it seemed to progress rather slowly; I'm more of a dig my nails in the meat and enjoy all the juices. Ha. I nibbled a bit and made it through the first two chapters, then it was like giving a toddler soda for the first time, I was -hooked-. While there are some simple mistakes, nothing major, I find your story heart-warming, compelling, complex and the best little crack-story I've read in a while.

I find I indulge in my Draco x Hermione stories and most of them are rather cliche that leave me missing that whole, 'ohhhh what happens next' element. Now I feel like I need to know what happens next because whilst I might have imagined one outcome you seem to find another little twist to throw in the mix. I know a lot of these other reviews have rather mixed emotions and don't want to rush you buuuut...I'll be the first to admit, I'M DYING HERE!

Personally, I think you portrayed Ron perfectly, I don't care for him much, but I think the temper and short-un-thought-through outbursts fit him in this situation. Blaise, oh what a sweetie, almost like the boy next door. (Love him and the thought of Ginny together.) Draco, oh-oh-oh, I can't gush enough about him...I do envision him with a bit more...animalistic side where you imagine him ripping off her clothes with his teeth. (Sexy Slytherin, Sex God, Former Bad Boy---love him!)

I look forward to seeing how the Yule Ball pans out! Great job so far!


Love. Love. Love. Love. Love.
schedule March 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Heyyyyyyyy :P This Is Amazing !!!! i want to know when hermiones going to perform at the yule ball as larissa grey !!!!!!! and when draco or blaise are going to find out !!!! but hey i aint pressuring you !!! but its brilliant so far!!!!
schedule March 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I was about to send out a search party! The new chapter was well worth the wait....last time I was on a date ice skating my gf and i didnt know how to skte and we tried to be good at it, ended up with her having a hairline fracture in her elbow. Glad to see this wasnt the case. hehe. I agree with you draco IS a cutie, now if I could convince tom felton to break up with his gf of 3 1\2yrs kick my hubby to the curb and have a crack at eachother life would be swell. Ill even take ONE o the pheps twins......but BOTH would be the best christmas present id ever recieve.