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Nice chapter

Finally some Real action again.^^

Only part I do not like (because I am a his fan^^) is how you bash Dumbledore so much.

For one, it seems in here as if he des not care for Harry at all.
And at the other, I think he, as headmaster, is in fact deeply respected by Hogwards.
I think, the fact he has no such free way in Hogwards as your Snape does is because he choose to hide this, not because he cant have them.


aside from this, I hope for a bit more actions in the next parts. (so mpre smut, more toys..^^)

Quinn

Loved the new chapter! In the interest if perfecting it: awkward angel should be awkward angle in a paragraph toward the end of the story (15th from end?)

I like it, good story

More, more, more. It's sexy, it's dirty and it's got a great plot! More!!! Can't wait for your update! :D

Omg love it I'm already checking if the next chapter is up. 48 hours is to long hell 24 hours is to long of a wait but oh well your the author so please update asap.

The formatting of your story is odd--the font is impossibly small and I can't enlarge it as the text dissapears off the right edge of my screen. (and no, clicking on 'enlarge font' does not help) I can barely read yor story. Is it posted at another archive? For some reason this archive (only this archive, and only some of the stories) seems to be incompatible with my iPod.

Hey, I am really enjoying your story it is excellent. The story line is good, plot is good. It is just great and I cannot wait to read more please update soon! Also I'm new to this website and I can't see any function to follow the stories, does it not have this feature? If it does can you please tell me where to find it.
Rachael

Thank you for updating. This is one of my favorite stories. Can't wait to see how their relationship progresses. Keep up the great work!

Please, please, please write another chapter, I love this story, the character of Snape is written so perfectly I find myself wishing I knew you and could just
listen to your mannerisms for a day, maybe a bit of Snape's mannerisms are in you as well? This is a beautiful story, and written so wonderfully, I wish you would self-publish a book. You never once go out of character and for that I am grateful and really wish for more chapters. I had thought you had abandoned this story, and was so happy when I found out a new chapter was posted. Please keep writing, and I hope we can talk someday, because I am literally just mindblown after every chapter.

Really enjoyed Snape with an accent! I'm also loved everything you've written so far about the Old Ways and Stewards and the conversation Harry had with Dobby about it and the history of the castle. Very nice :) Excited for an update! Keep up the good work.