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Omg omg omg I love it I thank you for updating I'm praticly crying I really hope your next chapter won't take so long go update but oh well you are the author sigh. I will be wating impationtly for your next chapter. It such a good storie oh and I hope the next chapter will have some more lemony goodness oh and some angushy moments you need to cause some drama. Like throw in some chick (ginny or cho) whom will try to steal harry away from his lovely severus. I will cause quite a stir oh and try to get dumbles to fuck with harry and snape so we can bash him and ron fuck just bash ron till he's dead (hate ron such a pig head) but any who I'm rambling. So yeah please please give us more I love it.

Your devoted crazy ron hateing ginny bashing snarry loveing fan,

NLM Snarrys_love_slave_BDSM

I really enjoy this story. It has depth, a realistic history to back up events, and characters that feel alive.

That being said, I read your most recent chapter and reread parts of the story to refresh my memory. Are you aware that you contradicted yourself a little? In chapter 9 you had Severus inform Filius that he had already dosed the entire Weasley clan except for Arthur and then in chapter 14 said that Arthur needed to dose his eldest children and his wife. I am not certain if that was on purpose or if I just misread the two parts.

I hope that your writers block disappears completely and that your life allows you to continue writing because I really truly want to know what happens in this world that you have crafted. I look forward to see how Severus will continue to bind Harry to himself. Will Severus enjoy piercing Harry, or will Harry be tied up and pleasured till he falls unconscious. In the next chapter I hope to find Harry again in compromising positions. Grin.

If it is possible please update soon!

I have been following this story for a while - one complaint, more updates please!!!!

OMG this story gets better an better every time i LOVE your long chapters an the twist an turns you take us on, keep up the amazing job :)

Wanted more Harry/Severus but this "explanation" chapt and "review" of Arthur's family was fun. Looking forward to Arthur's
talk with Molly, the children, especially Ron & Ginny.

Yes YES YEEEESSSSS !! Another chapter has arrived. Thank you thank you thank you. Whew! Just had to get that off my chest. Now to read, drink in, and devour these wonderous words ... and then I'll probably read from the beginning again (as I have done countless times already). Talk to you again in a bit.

Wow! A chapter full of exposition, as if you needed to clear your head and quantify all the ideas that you had for this story. I liked it! Though I admit I was a little disappointed by the lack of Severus and Harry interaction. Having all of this information now gives me a good idea of where you're going, and I hope it makes it easier for you to update. I sincerely like this story. It's evolved so nicely since that first chapter, becoming richer and deeper, and now with this mythology you're weaving I can't wait to see what happens next. I always thought that George and Fred would be particularly adaptable to this kind of life, and Ron is still malleable enough to shape into it.
Interesting, intriguing. Thanks for updating.

I like the writing style. It's smooth and easy to read/understand. However, I would add a shouta or pedo warning. Severus is constantly referring to Harry as a child or boy, even when his thoughts turn sexual. It makes it uncomfortable for me to read and enjoy it.I think other readers would feel the same if they're not expecting it. I'd also add Humil as a tag since Harry doesn't enjoy it.

Also, I don't see Severus as really caring for Harry. He seems to focus on what will turn him on(lying to Harry to get what he wants,etc) and only soothing him after he does something bad to Harry in the first place. For example, even when he's trying to calm Harry in the bath when he's cleaning him out Severus even then ignores some of Harry's pain. He's turned on and then thinks about keeping Harry without caring about Harry's opinion on the matter. Also, he made Harry eat everything, even though he knew it would make Harry uncomfortable. After being starved it can be harmful to force someone to eat more than they can tolerate. Harry would feel ill for hours. Severus could have just made Harry eat until he was full.

Anyway, this isn't a flame. I don't mean it as such. Sometimes it is hard to see how people will read/interpret a story, so I'm just sharing my opinion. I don't know if you mean Severus to come across as so manipulative. When I read the title and summary I figured there may be a little tough love at times(BDSM) and it is Severus after all, but I figured the focus would be on Severus taking care of Harry in a stable, affectionate way. He would make Harry's life better honestly, rather than manipulate him into thinking he's what's best for Harry. I think more of a focus on how Severus cares for Harry, rather than how he lust after him, would help with this. Also, if you ever edit this, maybe give the readers a little peak into how Severus thinks of how Harry before the punishment happens.

Again, good writing and it seems like it could be an interesting story.

This story continues to facinate me.

Eagerly anticipating updates!

What no Harry? Boo! Lol good chapter...I'd like to hear more of Severus' thoughts, especially regarding Harry. From this chapter and previous ones he seems to care more about controlling Harry and having his body...not Harry himself. I'd like to think he cares at least a little bit. I do love a complicated Severus but now I'd like to see what he really thinks of Harry as a person not his magic or looks. Can we hear more about why he was wanting to get in touch with petunia regarding the will and finding out about the cupboard? And the rest of the abuse. also why he chose the method of punishment he did...and why so long? three hours of constant agony is harsh! you have to admit. As possessive as Severus seems why hasn't he dealt with the Dursely's? Anyone that's hurt what he perceives as his I'd imagine him dealing with them harshly.